|Reviews for Monsters|
| LORD KIRA THE GREAT chapter 31 . 10/11/2014
the day that this fanfic ended was halloween. Good job on it
| anonnie chapter 2 . 9/9/2013
Hi, your story has a great plot, but with the POVS changing so fast, and with no proper grammar and spelling it's a bit hard to read. Just a thought, with those things your story would be great:) Thanks for giving me something interesting to read!
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/26/2013
baby brother/small crush
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
I KNEW he was a vampire, :)
| Kitty chapter 15 . 1/21/2013
Lol, Matt :3
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/23/2012
Your story seems okay, but without starting a new paragraph or some way to distinguish the headings and switch between characters in dialogue, it's kind of hard to read everything. There are run-on sentences, too.
| Dori chapter 20 . 10/21/2012
Yay! Near laughed.
| Noriko chapter 19 . 10/20/2012
SO GOOD! I was wondering about Matt, does he get to become human? And does Near like Sayu, and if so does that mean he hates Matsuda? And what was the toy the L took that got Light so upset?...
| moo chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
That was the shortest fricken chapter I've ever seen.
| Kyla chapter 13 . 10/14/2012
| Dori chapter 12 . 10/12/2012
. Thats a nice way to get your first kiss, Light.
| ChocoholicBrunette14 chapter 13 . 10/14/2012
I say C
| MoonLawliet chapter 12 . 10/12/2012
So, erm, why does kissing a human prove a point about loving them? O.o
Love the story so far, but that moment confused me
| JustAnotherPervert chapter 11 . 10/11/2012
The LxLight is processing very quickly, the L in here sure loves being direct.
| The Carnivorous Muffin chapter 11 . 10/11/2012
I commend your troll. There's really no other description for what this is.