|Reviews for Broken Woman|
| GigglingGirl chapter 2 . 10/10/2012
This is so amazing. Mel, I am literally crying but oh my fish it is so good but sad and SAMMY awh he is such a babe! You are such a babe and AWWWWH! 3 I love your fics so much! Xxx
| HedgieX chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
AW, THIS IS ADORABLE:3
Thank you Megan for forcing Mel to do another chapter! (ooh, I just called you Mel, that felt weird - it's like when everyone called Gabby 'Gabriella' and I called her Gabby and it was like "ooh, let's call her Gabby". What am I on about?)
I'm glad Dave is locked up! Loved how it was Andy doing it too, sort of loyalty to Gill;)
"Hey! I am strong thank you! I managed to move the sofa from the other side of the room last week!" - LOVE THAT LINE! It's so funny and yet it's all sentimental with Sammy looking after her as well!
| HedgieX chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Haha normally I do one review for the whole story, but I thought I'd do separate reviews for chapter 1 and chapter 2 here because I've got too much to say;)
As much as the theme of the story is horrible, you've written it really well and sensitively.
I love you showed how Gill felt knowing she'd once loved him and now he was doing that to her; it was one of those moments that sort of sends shivers down my spine!
And I also loved Kevin's comments, typical Kev! ;)
*moves onto next chapter excitedly*
| SassyRaydorGirl chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
Yaaay Gill's okay. Great Chapter xxxx
| Sazzy.x.x chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
AWW! I have no idea how I missed this one but I loved it :) Kevin's comments about Gill's boobs in the first chapter were classic Kevin ;) I did find it slightly amusing that Gill was thinking about whether Kevin was strong enough for Dave even as she was about to pass out from blood-loss, but maybe that's me reading into it too much ;D Point is...this is fab! Well done slap xx
| MegannLoouise chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
YOU BABE. aah, i love you so much!
So glad the Dave's been left to rot in hell!;D
Aw, Janet's hug and Gill trying to act all cool after it!
"You've both been absolute babes" hahahaa! And of course, Rachel, you are the boss's babe!:D
And aw, Sammy's so cute!
LOVED THIS MEL!xox
| Didget chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
ok i wasn't the only one who thought that scene could've gone far worse.
| MegannLoouise chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Dave. You are a knob. You are a knob. You are an all singing, all dancing, fully paid up member of the knob club.
Seriously, I hate Dave so much!
You have written this brilliantly! I was reading this with wide eyes (if that makes sense) and I cried! I cried because your writing is so good and because he dared to do that to my baby!:(
"just never thought I would be seeing the Boss's boobs" - at least Kevin lightened the mood a bit;')
"They're nice for your age" oh Kevin!
THIS IS BRILLIANT, KID! WHY AM I STILL CRYING?! Please do another chapter where they send the bastard down? Please? For me? *Kevin pout*
Anyway, I loved it!xoxox
| SassyRaydorGirl chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Omg I love this. I hope you're continuing with this. It's bloody good kid. Poor Gill though. Dave better pay for this big time and omg omg Kevin. Trust him to make a joke about Gill's boobs. Well at least he lightened the mood for a moment. On tender hooks hunni xxxxxxx