Reviews for Grey Spring
Singing Violin chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Aww, sweet! But again I want more. Is she at all embarrassed at being caught in the Therapy Office? And is she just exploring, like he is, or is she there for actual therapy? And why haven't they seen each other all week? Is it because of C7? (Are you ignoring Endgame's C7? Because that is a valid choice I would wholeheartedly support.) I love the sun metaphor, but Janeway's never been one to speak in metaphors, so I'm wondering what changed her.
AlexKoff chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Hi! I really liked this little piece. Very well written, very sad. But ypu are spot on, I think.

Alex
lizzy74656 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Interesting. I enjoy reading your insights. Please keep writting.
ibagoalie chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
nice start...I say that because I'd like to see a continuing series of their struggle to integrate back into society. In a lot of stories, the debriefings are just a couple weeks, then everything is hunky dory. It would be interesting to have a story arc that is more realistic. Your story has the right tone and I think would it would be an interesting series to have you maybe do a flashback to this story of going through debriefings, counseling, etc
ghosteye99 chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
A nice little h/c story, enjoyed it!
marie chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
nice story
Hockeygirl28 chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
awww i loved it, fantastical job my friend
mabb5 chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Nice little scene. Please write more