|Reviews for The Mercy of the Death Row|
| BloodintheWater chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
I think this is wonderful, in a very, very dark way. Especially the last part. You built up a fascinating relationship. I admit I don't like Shizuo's character here, but I see it is needed for the story. This thing that they want and desire each other despite the hate is fascinating and you showed it in a very good way.
But there are still things that I don't understand. For example, Shizuo runs away and then he is there again and kisses Izaya. Really don't understand it. And in relation are the last things Izaya says and that passionate kiss which is described afterwards?
That is a bit confusing, and it is also a bit confusing that the time you write in shifts quite often.
Anyway, I really like your wordings and the feelings and relationships you imply. Thank you for writing this oneshot. :)