Reviews for The Sweetest Sin
lunabloodmoon666 chapter 3 . 7/2/2013
oh this is awesome i think i fell in love so please update soon the characters are perfect and just plain awesome :)
the kid chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Why am I not reading anymore of your work? Six words:
"My hair fell in wavy waves..."
Just no.
N3ko8 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Woooow! The paragraphs are really long 0_0 I had to highlight the sentence so i didn't get lost. But cute Paul he's just so... Paul! Guess i'm off to the next chapter.
Daddy's-Little-Monsta chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
TheLostBoysLover19 chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Please update soon asap.:)
Daddy's-Little-Monsta chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Awsome first chapter! Please update soon
hope chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
update soon
miseryXlovesXmyXcompanyX chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Omg! I love this story so far! Please please update :)
tomieharley chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
So far, I really like the story. I hope you will continue it. Paul is my second favorite Lost Boy, so I'm always happy to see a story about him on here.

I think you did a really good job describing your character and what was going on around her and Paul. I think the only thing I could recommend doing would be to break up the dialogue into separate paragraphs, so you don't get these huge paragraphs.

Update soon!