Reviews for vETERAN wARRIOR |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What the actual fuckkkk? You bring back madara for no logical reason? Seriously just to have naruto fight? That has so many plot holes its absurd. I mean it’s obviously a made up story and we are using our imagination but dam that made no sense. |
![]() ![]() great story. i hoped to read more chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() la historia esta interesante deberías continuarla pero sabes en realidad si deberías ponerle un harem a naruto para que le de algo de emoción a la historia pero suerte con la actualización |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story i just hope that you haven't given up on it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your English grammar isb poor as fuck |
![]() ![]() ![]() I suggest revising this with a bit... No, a lot better grammar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Give nre detail, your chapters are very confusing to understand to those who don't have a clear understanding of the prequels. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. Can't wait for more. Is there a chance of Shimi also dating Naruto? |
![]() ![]() I am fucking begging you to change and fix the title. wHY wOULD yOU mAKE iT lIKE tHIS? |
![]() ![]() ![]() shaak ti with a naruto ahh yes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've good writing skills but it is quite corny and your grammatical errors do get quite annoying after a while.. if you need help just ask around.. no one will make fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A Third Path to the Future Harry Potter & Marvel crossover It is a novel quality fanfic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this chapter. I don't really know that much about the dark woman so getting some information on her is nice. Since naruto has zabuza's blade does that mean that he has any other blades of the 7 swordsman of the mist? Anyway, please update this story sometime soon. I really like it and want to continue reading it. Cheers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though i love sage mode a great mode, i don't think naruto should have been able to use it since there is no natural environment around him. He could have just used normal chakra to break free. I'm sure that after this incident that naruto and shaak ti. I'm sure that, since shaak ti saw the sad look on naruto's face, she will question him about it when they have time in private. I would really like to see the two do more missions together since (to me at least) shaak ti could do with more action because i think she is underrated. It would also help develop/start her relationship with naruto. Anyway, cheers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am curious about something. Is this chapter based off one of the episodes from the clone wars tv series? You know, the one where anakin, ahsoka and obiwan teach the rebels how to fight better except obviously the clone wars haven't started in this story yet. This dark jedi sirocco, is he just a character necessary for this chapter or will more dark jedi appear throughout this story? How much closer will naruto and shaak ti's bond/relationship have grown by this incident? I hope you don't take this the wrong way but since your chapters move fast does that mean that the relationship between naruto and shaak ti will move fast as well? Anyway, to me, this is one of your best stories. I want to continue reading more. Cheers. |