Reviews for Just Like a Forgotten Dream
Cookiecat156 chapter 9 . 5/16
I can't stop laughing about Kaoru teaching Hikaru how to make cereal . The mystical piece of metal part made me laugh too much !
Guest chapter 18 . 3/16
Oh. My. God. WTF U CAN'T JUST END IT WITH ONE OF THEM DYING! UR GONNA MAKE ME CRY THAT'S SO SAD!
PretzelDemigod82 chapter 18 . 4/12/2015
This is such a great story. You wrote Kaoru's POV so well, and the ending... Wow. You're a very talented writer. I don't think I've had a piece affect me emotionally this much before. Thank you.
EverAce chapter 18 . 1/31/2015
Over the past several months I have I read this story-

Three times.

I'd put enough time in between so it would seem fresh when I re read it. So I just wanted to say thank you for this story. : )
Datgurl chapter 18 . 1/27/2015
Oh my goodness...
Your amazing at writing..
That ending tho, rlly got me
Lala the Screaming Fangirl chapter 18 . 1/11/2015
Why? It's so sad! Kaoru! Why?
Lala the Screaming Fangirl chapter 14 . 1/11/2015
Will you actually write about a time where they cook and DON'T fail? (Sorry, this isn't supposed to be offensive. It's just so funny how they keep burning everything.)

Oh. The chapter started off quite well, but when I got to Hikaru's POV, it all became so sad. I hope they can help Kaoru.
Lala the Screaming Fangirl chapter 10 . 1/11/2015
Oh. My. God. That song...I was totally shocked.

Phew! When i read about his dream, I thought it was real life. I freaked out! Thank god he didn't do it. I think Hikaru's heart would break if he did.
Lala the Screaming Fangirl chapter 9 . 1/11/2015
I seriously can't believe Hikaru BURNED cereal. Haha! Totally hilarious!

If only Kaoru knew how important he is to Hikaru...

I agree with Hunny. Hikaru and Kaoru ARE individuals, so Kaoru shouldn't be feeling that he's taking up too much space in Hikaru's life.
Lala the Screaming Fangirl chapter 6 . 1/11/2015
OMG! I LOVE the joke about Kaoru being 'retarded'. I can totally imagine background music going "Boun boun boun"

Your story is quite hilarious and also really sad and grey. This is actually my second time reading this. I don't quite remember it, so I look forward to keep reading.
Lala the Screaming Fangirl chapter 5 . 10/22/2014
I feel sorry for Hikaru...
Lala the Screaming Fangirl chapter 4 . 10/22/2014
Kaoru, don't...Hikaru would kill himself if you did it...
ColorLover123 chapter 18 . 6/9/2014
NO NO NO NO NONONONONONO WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY .DAMSLXBMKALKENOJSDO
Raconni chapter 18 . 4/28/2014
what...what?...What?!...WHAT! lkjdabguipadgiuasdhgjasdbfiuasdfhusifui I'm not sure what to think of this ending...Its truly an...interesting ending...yet at the same time WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU! this was a great writing piece but THEY BOTH DIED I was thinking MAYBE Kaoru but...wow... I wasn't expecting that...and I don't surprise easily, good job
How should I feel chapter 18 . 3/29/2014
I loved your story, even though it made cry my eyes out. Thanks for writing it, it's just so beautiful. Thank you.
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