Reviews for Sibling Rivalry
csiKathy chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Hey, the horse isn't too lame. This was pretty funny and it used all the words.
thehappystalkerball chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
I just burst out laughing! Best. Ending. Ever. Totally loved it! Soooo cute!
Holly chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Devon so good you are at writing! you have a gift and you should use it more often.
MSCSIFANGSR chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
yeah, those stupid boys with their man-crushes. LOL nicely written and pompitous is not a real word, nor did i intend for everyone to go off on a 'The Joker' tangent (even though jellybean and i did). thank you for not doing so. :) chauncey
Hithui chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
ROFLMAO! Love it :)
RosePetal7 chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
"'Quivering with indignation'? What have you been reading?Fifty Shades of Grey?"

Greg pretended not to hear her. "Anyway, without Grissom here to rein you in someone has to take control."

Sara scoffed. "Grissom could never rein me in." "Touché. 'If You Can't Beat Them, Join Them: A Gilbert Grissom Guide to Relationships.'" "All is fair in love and war." She grinned. Sooo good. Though the whole thing was! Especially Greg and Nick having the hots for Gil ;) lol
JellybeanChiChi chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
I really, really liked this a lot. I never thought of it from that perspective. I just assume Nick is always an ass, but what you wrote makes complete sense. I thought the last part was spot on perfect. Well done.
CSIBuckeye chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
LOL! Loved the banter between Greg and Sara. It felt just right. Very nicely done!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
cute.. hope you'll come back and write more CSI Fic..
Marymel chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Great job. I love how Greg has grown up, and I think you captured the relationship between him and Nick and Sara very well.
Kasey47 chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
That was awesome. Nicky having the hots for Greg. But you really have to stop with the It's suck so I don't know why you would read it" introduction... :)