That was interesting and worth the read. The scene changes were jarring, and it could easily have been ten times longer.

Very touching! An enjoyable slice-of-life/backstory that fills in some details/gaps in the past lives of our heroines. The interplay of emotions was nice, and I particularly liked the interaction between Luna and Serenity thing you built up there. And Venus dumping the slushie over Artemis's head was just choice. (And he pretty much deserved it, considering...)

Thanks for sharing this with us!