|Reviews for Your Move|
| Sai-miyoshi chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
somehow this reflects the story...so sad ...
| Mon Esprit Libre chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Kind of... angst-fluffy...? Idk the term.
| FantasizingRealist chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Beautifully and artfully written! The ending was creative, insightful, and sad all at once. Well done!
| Rina of Cool chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Naw Raito! :((( That was sad. L T-T
| Accidental Child chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Umm... It was a good story, but there is just a feel of slight OOC. Not much, but it seemed that way. Good job, though. Light and L are difficult characters to white in character.
| DarkPhantom101 chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
hmm it sems really sad at the end. i wounder if L would wish light is still there to continue the game
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
i like the metaphor of the chess board for the killings and one-upping of the twos relationship, but i believe you should have left out the thing explaining the pawns and how it was a kira move. An intelligent reader would pick up on the metaphor :)