|Reviews for Chained World 02: Saving Grace|
| Wharpt chapter 12 . 2/22
While Kasumi had decided to not join the rest of the family on their plantation tour, something gives me the feeling she may catch up to them within the next day or two,especially if she is travelling with Ryouga. Hopefully, they'll even be wearing wearing clothes when they show up.
Looks like thing are about to get nasty again. Will we see Usagi throwing Tiara Boomerangs next to Ranko's Mouko Takabisha's?
| skywiseskychan chapter 11 . 10/29/2014
Yay, more of this, its always fun, as is Nabiki and Kodatchi having 'fun' just for headgames with others.
As for Ami and Usagi, awww... I admit it I'm one of those who hoped that they could... enjoy themselves while Usagi goes after Ranma. :)
| Wharpt chapter 11 . 10/18/2014
Careful, girls! You may find your 'prank' taking on a deeper meaning than you thought! So Kodachi has been successful in getting the photos/videos that she wanted and boy, is the fecal matter definitely impacting the rotary oscillating air-mover device! Good job!
Speaking of photos, is anybody in the Tendo/Saotome party taking any for the official family photo book? I'd love to see Nodoka's reaction to a photo of Usagi out on the surf sans bikini!
| Shinzochi chapter 10 . 5/3/2014
rotfl, looks like times are gonna be really fun with Nabs, and Kasumi, looking forward to the next chapter
| Wharpt chapter 10 . 5/3/2014
The heiress and the otokodate, ehh? That ought to upset some apple carts along the way.
I feel a little sorry for Akane on this trip. She's going to have very limited access to her husband while the other players are having 'fun'. But hopefully 'Ranko' will have an opportunity to 'relax' and enjoy her self.
I know you have plans for Usagi and Ranko, but I'm cuious to know if Usagi also has feelings towards Ami as well?
Thanks for the chapter.
| Kalaong chapter 9 . 2/10/2014
Ooh lala... Good stuff, tender yet naughty and playful. Followed and favorited!
| Shinzochi chapter 9 . 2/9/2014
i haven't read the version on AO3 (which i don't even know what it stands for or what it's web address is though i would be interested in comparing the difference between here and the version there) but i find that the citrus content here to be just right, it isn't too heavy but isn't too light either, for instance the part mentioned about Ranma eating Kasumi in a future night would still be in the balance you have, you wrote it descriptive but not explicit and i am looking forward to the next chapter as well as the hilarity when Kasumi brings the subject up to Ryoga, it is gonna be hilarious
| skywiseskychan chapter 8 . 10/7/2013
Is there any difference now between the published stories here and on AO3? I'm just curious if there is a prefered location to read them.
As for this chapter I like seeing a Kasumi so discombobulated that she's entirely transparent, and the touch about family being what to threaten in Japan was a nice one. I'm looking forward to seeing Ranma's reaction to the request, and of course Usagi and Ranko's relationship change.
I think though that it is going to take some time for readers to re-enter Ranma's psyche. Its been a long time in the world, but we don't know where Ranma really is mentally. We've mostly seen things from outside his/her head and I'm looking forward to seeing that change.
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/5/2013
Kasumi is such a loser and pathetic if she can't find her own man to have a baby. And for her to even think about using her sister, Akane's husband is more than shameful. Akane is being dumb and stupid for even considering letting her husband di this. Also there is artificial insemination or sperm donors, that don't need to do all this bs, having a sister screw another's sister's man.
| Wharpt chapter 8 . 10/4/2013
I hope Ranma gives Kasumi the chance to utter an 'Oh,My! Yes!' so loud it'll be heard at the Emperor's palace! ;)
| Shinzochi chapter 8 . 10/4/2013
Well Hiroshi sure has gotten quite the back bone and it just goes to show how far he has come to be made Nabiki's replacement as boss while she is on her working vacation and things with Kasumi and Ranma are going to be interesting and i feel sorry for Kasumi not being able to have Tofu cause he disappeared so i am looking forward to the next chapter and seeing what happens next
| Shinzochi chapter 7 . 8/16/2013
lot of curiosity as to what is all going on so i am looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens next
| Shinzochi chapter 6 . 7/22/2013
well things sure are gonna get interesting aren't they (_) i am looking forward to what happens next
| Wharpt chapter 6 . 7/21/2013
"We're going on a tropical vacation, yay!"
What a group! Nabiki, Kodachi (nice choice of help from Setsuna!), Ranko, Akane, Ukyo, Nodoka, Kasumi, Usagi, Dr. Mizuno, Ami and a group of Amazons. All you need now is a shrine maiden to bless the plantations (Rei), an additional cook to help Kasumi (Makoto), and ... Say, what IS Minako doing these days?
On another tack, where are the Mau advisors Artemis and Luna?
| Rose1948 chapter 5 . 6/22/2013
Another fine chapter. I like how Nabiki's mind seems to be on dessert and *cough* 'dessert.' *laughs*
So Setsuna's setting out to fix things, eh? That's gonna be fun. *chuckles* Hope things don't break apart in her or Nabiki's hands. That'd be kinda painful.
Thanks for sharing, hon.