Reviews for Back to Base
Meggles425 chapter 2 . 11/30/2014
I got a little confused cos there were so many people and maybe make the paragraphs a little shorter but still good job and keep updatingi love the story ;) !
Guest chapter 2 . 4/27/2013
I like the plot, but I have trouble following it because of how it's written. When a new person speaks you're suppose to start a new paragraph. I couldn't figure out who was saying what half the time. But I did like the plot.
LNA chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
You need to organize your writing but other than that so so
C.R.Fitzgerald chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Oh, and River has BLONDE hair and GREEN eyes. :(
C.R.Fitzgerald chapter 2 . 10/10/2012
Not making an awful lot of sense. Sorry. I have no clue what the plot line is, who's saying what,what's happening...terribly sorry, I just don't understand any of it :(
Viper5336 chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
I am hoping you will update soon. This story already has my intrest.