|Reviews for FTB|
| cornwallace chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
This chapter was much more tense.
Perfect way to end it. Didn't move to quickly, which you mentioned you thought might be an issue. I thought the pacing was very nicely done.
I like the direction you seem to be going in with your writing. I encourage you to keep it up - stories like this are more what I'm into these days. I'm thinking this is one of my favorite things you've written.
| cornwallace chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
Daffy in this is one of the most amusing characters you've ever written.
This chapter is funny in that sort of painfully humiliating way. I found myself laughing with my face in my palm a few times.
| cornwallace chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
I like that everything you write is different and good.
I swear, you're like five different writers packed into one.