|Reviews for The Fall of Enjolras|
| RainWillMakeTheF chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
I couldnt get m'y username in All the way, oh well...i just have one other minor critique. You said "we not give up" as opposes to "we Will not give up". Nous n'allons pas abandonner is what you wanted perhaps? Or maybe i read it wrong, i dont know. Im sorry, i feel like All i am doing is downgrading this; but really, it is VERY good! Keep writing! Also Google translate BAD AND UNRELIABLE just btw...XD vive les françaises, non ? Le launge français est une launge génial, et j'aime-ce ! Heehe. Happy saturday
| RainWillMakeTheFlowersGrow chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
This is really good! Only one SMALL note: The songs you mentioned were All originally written in French, and the anglofied versions were changed a bit so that they would rhyme. Thus; the songs are not actually what you have up there. If you want, you can look up the original French concept album (m'y personal favorite) and get the actual french songs À la Volonté du Peuple (the Will of the people, the french do you hear the people sing) and Rouge et Noir (red and black). If not, It's fine, i am among the minorité and not many people Will notice a déférence because they cannot speak french. :) VERY Nice for a first fic though!
| Rosebud5 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
EEEP OMG THIS WAS SO GOOD I CAN'T EVEN...
Okay, now that I've fan-girled...
This was beautiful. I loved it all... Enjy's dying moments... So beautiful. Having now seen the musical live AND the new movie, as well as read sections of the brick and seen two old classic versions, I can safely say Enjolras is my favorite character, with Eponine close behind. This short snippet into Enjy's mind as he died for what he knew was right was so beautiful it brought tears to my eyes. Lovely job.
| you're-not-your chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Sobbing currently. Please do not disturb.