Reviews for Don't Go To Four Star Restaurants
Levaya Jade chapter 15 . 3/19/2013
Hm. Interesting. I'm a wee bit confused... But that does explain why Umbitch's always after Harry. Your writing's a bit abrupt... It's still good though. Like that chapter with Dorcas. Lily just tuned and left and nothing else has happened with the protest... Like it just faded away. And I'm confused at what's going on with Sirius and James and why Remus was all over Lily. I'll wait to find out.
Beth 37 chapter 15 . 12/2/2012
I feel like I have waited for too long for an update...Today is my 16th birthday, and I would LOVE if you would update soon :D PLEASE!
Beth chapter 15 . 11/28/2012
I like that you are incorporating modern day issues...I also really like how it seems to follow the books in the way that these are the back stories :) Now I'm just waiting for more chapters! I keep looking everyday, but so far nothing... :/
Claire chapter 15 . 11/23/2012
This is a really good story.
JamesPotterwasntaseeker chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Definitely an interesting start. I do like the fast pace.
Books are air chapter 15 . 11/20/2012
DUN DUN DUN! Dolores JANE Umbridge!
Guest chapter 15 . 11/20/2012
Wow nice! Keep writing this is really good.
There are so many Lily/James fanfics on here and most of them are pretty bad but this is great!
I love how this is the start of Umbridge hating everything that's not pure wizard.
Really puts a spin on things, to hear how she's influenced by both family and friends.
I noticed the scarf, maybe work some kittens in next chapter? ;)
So yes, keep writing! :D xxx
MagicalSmile chapter 15 . 11/20/2012
Heey! This is really good! I just didn't understand the end of the latest chapter.. so is this Jane Umbridge? :O or what?
papercranesandplanes chapter 5 . 11/19/2012
Eh,I'm not sure how I feel about these few chapters... Lily is funny and I laughed hard at some parts,Frank and Alice are just the cutest things,but... this is turning into one of those Lily-hates-James-and-can't-go-five-minutes-without-yelling-at-him stories and... sorry,but I don't like that. And the thing that annoys me more than that is how she's best mates with Sirius but can't even hold a civil conversation with James. Sorry,I had to say this. I'm just not one of those Sirius-is-the-biggest-Jily-shipper-ever. I hope things will change soon.
Oh,finally there's Remus Lupin! Even if only shortly. :)
papercranesandplanes chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Hahaha, I LOVE the ending! I'm glad this is a Humour/Romance story, I really need a break from all the Angst I've been reading lately. This is refreshing.
I never though about Lily as an insecure, introvert girl who thinks she doesn't deserve Head Gorl badge, but then again, she IS a teenage girl, and she's allowed to have her insecurities. I actually prefer to read stories where she's portrayed as a bit insecure than the ones where she's mature beyond her age and always rational and perfect. I mean, she's 17, not 37, people, honestly!
Anyway, I like how you write her so far.
And, I love how you actually did your research with music/books in the story. Stephen King, Fleetwood Mac's "Rumours", Blondie, Cher... It's all '70s. I hate when people make James and Lily go to see a film that came out in the '80s, not '70s or when they have ipods or something like that. Unless the story is AU, set in modern time.
Well, this is long, sorry - I always get carried away - I should go read the next chapter,because I'm really interested to see how on earth did Lily's dad and James' dad became friends. :)
moosemika chapter 11 . 11/17/2012
This is really good! Though, i am a bit confused as to what James was talking about. What is the rumour?
Books are air chapter 12 . 11/17/2012
Drunk Lily is funny!
ZippyStar chapter 12 . 11/17/2012
Really enjoying this story. Just one thing, at the beginning you say Peter's gone home but then he appears a few sentences later.
Looking forward to the next update :D
Guest chapter 11 . 11/14/2012
Three updates in a matter of days? Good job! Update soon!
BTW... can there be more James/Lily?
LoonyLoonyLuna chapter 10 . 11/13/2012
Awesome! ;)
Keep up with the suspense, wanting more asap please!
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