Reviews for Breath of life
blue'sgirl2 chapter 17 . 12/1/2012
oh plz update it's a really good story i love it so much
Slyfox chapter 17 . 11/19/2012
Hmm... It sounds stupid. Only because they let bella go on her own.
madnessdownunder2 chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
that was one part from the movie that really pissed me off "we're husband and wife we're in tghis together. When do I get a say?" When did BEELA ever get a say? Edward forced ther prom on her ,he forced her birthdasy party on her ,despite the fact shebegged him at least three times she didn't want it. He had the whole family leave her for SEVEN MONTHS then walze back into her life like nmothing happened, he blackmailed her into marrying him, he wouldn't love her of change her until she did. And even by his own words it was only to stop her from changing- he said this himself- twice. Bella didn't want a big flashy wedding but he forced this on her too. By what rights does he have the nerve to say what right does he have!Really!
blue'sgirl2 chapter 7 . 11/6/2012
wow this relley good
I3HungerGames chapter 13 . 11/6/2012
Like it a lot
blue'sgirl2 chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
I like it I hope you key it up
sally.l.hill chapter 2 . 10/21/2012
i think you should've made edward like extemely worried like in the book in your story although i love it it's like Edward is actually happy about it. but i love it
sally.l.hill chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
i really liked it. that's all i can say
If-Only-You-Believed-Me chapter 5 . 10/20/2012
it's girl it shoud be the girl is what she has in the move so yea it should be a girl naed renessama c./nessie :)
If-Only-You-Believed-Me chapter 4 . 10/19/2012
i lik ur vershoin better then the real
mambajama chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
so far so good story
Virgodragon16 chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
This is really interesting. Hope to see more. :)
mambajama chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
So far so good.