|Reviews for Like a Dog Chasing a Cat|
| Jacob shives chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
| Baby Fawn chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
this is looking good so far. I cant wait to read more of this. hope you update this one soon
| Y-ko chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
I bet you use one of those really ugly hair packs.
As for real feedback, stop switching the point of view around so rapidly, it's annoying. All that gushing about how super-special and awesome your character is can't be disguised by stuffing it into other characters' mouths. And your title is really awkward and not half as clever as you probably thought it was.
| LadyDragon1316 chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
I'll admit a Khajiit romance takes some getting used to, but it is a very sweet romance. I like it.