Reviews for Dakota attacks
Cindysong chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
When you have warrior names, it would be one word. Like Sunstar, not Sun star. Also, a little confusing- pups? Cats hate dogs. And shouldn't Dakota have a Clan na,e? What was a wolvenberg? Are they all dogs? You should probably explain it a little more.
This was good. I love the ending- That's what Clanmates are for! It was a perfect ending to the fanfic.