|Reviews for Damage Done|
| Whimsical-notes chapter 3 . 10/10/2012
Yes, another update!
You've made me terribly interested in knowing how things will turn out, and I can't wait to read more!
Grape is a terrific ship, and it'll always my my OTP; it's just that awesome. I can't wait for the next update!
| kitty-gurl1 chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
oh? is Snape maybe using some of his magic the accidental/emotional way?
| orlando switch chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Yay, an new story of yours! And what a promising beginning. Just wondering: why was Hermione the only one visiting Snape? What happened with Minerva or other order members? Is he still in touch with them?
I like your attention to detail and I really hope this will be a nice, long story.
| orlando switch chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
When I see your name I always think of Love, carefully folded which is one of my all time favorite stories. And here you have done it again: portrayed both Snape and Hermione in a vulnerable way, caring for each other but not really aware about their mutual feelings. I like the balance between their slow inner change and the events that happen outside them and around them. And I'm really looking forward to your updates twice a week!
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
So the coffee just fell "accidentially" in Viktors lap? It's good Snape seems to be able to wield some magic but he still must have some blocks between himself and his magic if he didn't felt it was his doing. And I liked his message to Draco, it was such typical Slytherin kind of action (both the hex in hindsight and his note). I hope Draco wants to get in touch again. He needs some help to get his funds back if he don't want to involve Potter. - I must say this made me wondering where Minerva is in this whole story, or other former Order members like Kingsley. - One question though, you said one chapter earlier they had to go to the ministry and his healer appointment and we only have seen them go to Gringotts and his healer. Was the ministry appointment not interesting?
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/9/2012
Okay, now they have 3 things at hand: restoring Snape's magic, his acces to his funds and Draco... Interesting. You know, it's so nice to read a well written and interesting story that every line is a treat.
| duj chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
I had no difficulty imagining multiple situations where he wouldn't be happy in a bookshop. With all her admirable qualities, she doesn't seem to have grown in creativity or flexibility of mind since canon.
Krum in DH seemed spoiled by his fame, I thought, where three years earlier he'd seemed burdened by it. She's probably better off without him.
| 188.8.131.52.nolongerinuse184.108.40.206 chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
Great chapter :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
LOVE it! Wonderful to read a new story of yours.
| Shiv chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
Well I think he's solved his magic block there!
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| Teddy Radiator chapter 3 . 10/8/2012
I'm looking forward to where this story will progress, and judging from the trajectory and your writing skills, I highly doubt I'll be disappointed. You've given us a very well rounded, someone grounded Severus, a smart, funny, loyal to the core and sexy Hermione, and an antagonist they can both fight - the Wizarding world. I like this Severus; I have always believed that, had he survived, he would try to find his own way into the world and leave his rancor and bitterness behind - if the world would let him. I'm going to enjoy seeing him grow stronger. Thank you for sharing.
| lovealan chapter 3 . 10/8/2012
Enjoying your story, please upate soon.
| RCLaurent chapter 3 . 10/8/2012
I like this story more with every chapter.