Reviews for It All Led To This
Guest chapter 7 . 10/12
Rewrite! :D And it'd be interesting if the League had gotten in the mess Danny's in. -snickers-
JustaPhantom chapter 6 . 8/28
'He's nuts Spiky.' He is, he really is
Wild Imagination 7 chapter 7 . 8/15
I'd personally like to see a rewrite. Maybe keep the same plot.
B.W.BunnyAndRaven-Chan chapter 7 . 5/17
I personally found this story very entertaining. The "childish mindset" put a nice feel on the characters thoughts and their general heroics. I wouldn't change much, but it could definitely use a touch-up. Whatever you do, do NOT DELITE IT! I would honestly be very very upset if that happened. As long as we go into Danny's psyche and he tells the Titans what happened to him (hopefully including crying...), I'm good with anything.
Phantom Fire Phoenix 1 chapter 5 . 4/3
This story is fucking retarded.
I LOVE IT!
NotYou chapter 7 . 3/26
Just re-write it and fix it up. You have a good foundation so far. Just fix anything that needs fixing and continue where u left off. Btw there might be some mistakes but its still a nice story! Good luck with either fixing or just starting over! :)
Crystalzap chapter 7 . 2/26
Oh I wish you'd continued this, Danny's personality was a little weird but not bad.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/7
just edit it. or "give it new coat of paint."
PhoenixWillowsRox88 chapter 6 . 1/29
Sorry, stupid autocorrect. I think you get the gist.
PhoenixWillowsRox88 chapter 7 . 1/29
I think that you should rewrite this; start anew, Yami know?
Guest chapter 7 . 1/24
dude, yes! absolutely rewrite it-if you want to, that is. i'd like to see this with that fresh-coat-of-paint. :) it'd be like those then-and-now progress pictures artists do, at least for the first few chapters.
Jsomethingorother chapter 7 . 1/13
Rewrite! As you said there are definite issues. But it is still interesting enough I want to see want to see what happens next.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/9
New coat of paint!
JubJub 0250 chapter 7 . 1/3
Rewrite please.
jeanette9a chapter 7 . 1/1
i say let it be as it is. don't delete this one, somebody is always going to love the original.
but write (different file) a rewrite only if you feel like it.
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