Wow! What an amazing story! I loved it all! Thank yiu for writing this.

Great story :)

All of these characters are so well written. Excellent stuff! Edward’s talk with Maggie was just about perfect. Perhaps a bit heavy on the punishment, but justifiable.

I knew this was coming. I just hope Heidi keeps her word... YIKES!

I still have the nagging feeling that Heidi is going to out them ahead of time.

I voiced that thought before. I'm sure Maggie already spilled the beans. This will go downhill quickly.

I have a nagging feeling that either someone is going to find out or someone saw or heard them. I hope I'm wrong. I also hope Maggie doesn't say anything to her mom and she's the one who outs them...

Came across this, read it a second time and loved more : )

Re-reading this from years ago. This hasn’t aged well. I feel like she basically raped him in the break room.

I mean is their relationship really worth going weeks without seeing each other? I have a feeling Maggie is going to milk this whole thing to where they won't get to be together anytime soon. Maybe she should just take a step back and figure out whether staying with him is worth it if they have to keep it a secret and she doesn't even get to see him on the weekends either. I understand putting your kids first, but she's almost 17 and Bella can't even come over to see him for over 3 weeks already is getting extreme.

Great story, thank you for your work!

Love love love this! Thank you so much for sharing!

I absolutely loved this story! It was awesome! You did an amazing job!

That is so unfair yo Maggots e and Bella. I hope Bella is prepared to wait the months or possibly year or so for Maggie to come around. I don't think they will stay together I think to much time will pass

Loved the story from beginning to end. Well written and wonderful character depth.

Will read again!