|Reviews for Beyond the Break Room|
| Emo4 chapter 36 . 10/12
I just re-read your story and I still love it! it is so well written. the characters all grow so much over the course of the story.
| Elle Whitecap chapter 36 . 10/2
I guess I’m like the Charlie in this story. I put off reading it because the age gap. I didn’t think I’d like it. Turns out that your Edward is one of my absolute favorites, and this story is fantastic.
| PurpleRain27 chapter 36 . 9/25
Love, love, love, love, loved this story! Just brilliant.
| JojoJinx chapter 36 . 6/4
i loved this story. I really appreciate that despite how complicated and naturally dramatic their relationship was you were not dramatic as an author or overly dramatic. The responses and rections of the characters were realistic and I loved the maturity of Bella and Edward in both their relationships and with their friends. The way characters admitted their mistakes to each other and apologised and the way characters accepted and apprectiated the apologies. A truly beautiful story. My only sadness is that I would of loved a lot more writing on Bella's pregnancy and giving birth. I just think that would of been incredibly beautiful to see. I mean just think how much Edward would of loved, doted and appreciated sharing the experience with Bella and I also kind of imagined Maggie being with Bella when she gave birth. The only other thing I wish had happened would be if Maggie had a big group of friends round including a few guys and one of them tried to hit on Bella and had a massive crush and Maggie getting furious with him whilst Bella stands arm crossed raising one eyebrow and Edward advises the guy to leave. Haha could of been an amusing situation.
At the same time I love the gentleness of this story and I really liked how Bella went to the football matches and took Maggie shopping and was patient with her and forgiving. I loved that she didn't cause problems with Heidi and how she listened loved and supported Edward. I thought she was beautiful in her patience and commitment when Maggie was struggling after hearingabout her mothers affairs.
I loved Edward's honest, loving and firm parenting. I loved how Edward created a candlelit dinner when they were unable to go out in public and how much he loved and appreciated Bella. I also loved that though Edward had been on the earth longer he sometimes seemed younger due to the vulnerable somewhat insecure man Heidi had created and how it sometimes felt in someways like it was Bella who was the older of the two. Overall i just want to say thankyou and I really loved and appreciated this beautiful story. 3 xxxx
| JojoJinx chapter 17 . 6/3
Wow to Edward. I think everyone needs an Edward to sit them down and explain things to them. He breaks it down so well. Respect to him...(or I guess you as you wrote him :D)
| JojoJinx chapter 15 . 6/3
I agree that it felt right Bella saying I love you first.
On another note...
I am wondering just how bad an influence Heidi is on Maggie and if Heidi is saying bad things about Bella to her.
| JojoJinx chapter 11 . 6/3
Okay, here is who are my suspects of who it could be. My top choice... Heidi. My other two is either Tanya or Pat.
| JojoJinx chapter 10 . 6/3
Okay I love this story. It is tender and beautiful. The two things that worry me though is them not telling tanya and jasper about their relationship aas i truly think they can be trusted and i think it will hurt them that they were lied to... and secondly I fear that Heidi might find out from maggie about Bella and deliberately cause issues at work or get jealous because of bella's youth and beauty. Also ugh to Heidi... Edward s beautiful as is Bella... love them together and their characters and personalities. Love how Edward is with Maggie and I love how he is learning what a happy healthy relationship should be like through bella. Because he is somewhat vulnerable it actually feels like they are at a similar maturity level...like the same ages almost and very equal. They support and comfort each other. I would definitely like to know about Bella's parents though and a bit about her ex's. As for Maggie... I don't hate her at all. I think she is dealing with a lot and could be behaving a lot worse then she is but hopefully she will be kinder and more thoughtful towards her Dad (Edward) now they have had this chat.
Thankyou for sharing
| Leolove3 chapter 36 . 5/2
Amazing story! Couldn’t stop reading!
| pinkshoes81 chapter 36 . 4/13
Love this story, thanks for sharing x
| Emo4 chapter 1 . 1/27
I loved this sweet story!
| sherimi chapter 36 . 1/23
| Guest chapter 28 . 4/22/2019
Okay...so edward is teying to give his daughter repercussions for bad behavior but he and bella have been lying this whole time and doing bad stuff at work...what kind of an example is that? Where are their repercussions
| Guest chapter 23 . 4/21/2019
Yes its awful to with youdisnt have a kid...holy crap...i would cry if i heard a parent say that about me
| Guest chapter 22 . 4/21/2019
Wrong thing to say...bella will always be 2nd to his the way it should be