|Reviews for Beyond the Break Room|
| kysouza3123 chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
Loved it! Excited for the next chap!
| gracefish21 chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
| twicrazreader chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
Omg loved this chapter. I really hope you give us more of Charlie and Maggie...they could have a special bond I feel.
The party was great.
Can't wait for more.
| eb2000 chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
That was absolutely wonderful! I loved everything about it!
| tulips3 chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
Great party! Everything went very smooth.
His friends and family very supportive.
Yay maggie, Alice and Jasper. Loved this story!
| romycullen chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
OMFG THIS THIS CHAPTER. MY HEART! Sorry but this was just so so wonderful honey! Gaaaah I love how real and just wonderful this story is! Even the descriptions are completely real, Edward's parents in their seventies ageing well but AGEING, and how you described the house -totally want to be there seems so cosy...
I also got nostalgic, I've been following this since it was a one shot, for some reason made me have all this fluttering inside. I'm so glad I found this story. One of the best I've read in a long time. Mainly because of how real it is and how seems haven't been rushed. The characters have built up so nicely and matured along the story. The way the bonds have formed... *claps while standing*
And you know I had my angsty period towards one of the characters *coughs* and I completely love him now. By the way, still love Maggie to pieces, and same with Bella. Seeing them bond in this chapter and feeling their closeness in age... AMAZING.
| twiclare chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
That was so lovely, I have a big smile on my face! I loved how Bella, Edward and Maggie really seemed like a family together, they were just so comfortable and warm. Loved how Maggie and Charlie got along so well and Edward's family seemed really nice. I think Elizabeth might be looking forward to some more grandchildren! And Jasper and Alice hit it off straight away. Thanks, really enjoyed that.
| SinCityTowGirl chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
Great chapter. I had a smile on my face the entire time I was reading. I am so happy for these 2 and Maggie is really giving me some proud mama moments here lately!
| Just Sus chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
I think they all got along swimminly! What a great party! Glad to see Maggie standing up for Bella...that's awesome!
Love this story...hope you're feeling better!
| featherme chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
Great party...great chapter. I really liked what Elizabeth said to Bella.
| Who'sTorchwoodHarryDoctorDraco chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
Somehow this is my favourite chapter so far, I say somehow because I'm surprised it's my favourite even without any smut, ;D
Can't wait for the next instalment, :)
| cusic1981 chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
Great chapter so happy the party was a success. The part with Maggie and Charlie is awesome.
| Leibeezer chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
That was a very successful party. I was glad to see Maggie defend Bella to her friends, I can see Jessica's side this, but for Maggie I'm glad they worked things out. Edward's mom is awesome, I'm glad that she gave Bella her blessing and that she sees how both Maggie and Edward are so happy. It's great that Bella has also become friendly with Kate and Garrett, and that they were talking about double dating. I wonder what Charlie and Maggie talked about after Bella had left them after hearing Maggie defend her. It seems like Alice's opinion of Edward has changed, and I'm happy about that. Will Alice be moving closer now that she's met Jasper? I loved the end when Edward and Bella kissed (after Maggie had hung out that mistletoe) That was very nice of her. I can't wait to read whats going to happen next. Already looking forward to next Tuesday.
| RandyWriter chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
What a great party! I knew they would all hit it off, and did they ever. I thought Maggie's defending of Bella was brilliant, and how Bella and Charlie just happened to hear it...awesome! So glad to see everyone getting along, and Bella knows just when to make a departure from a room to let people talk amongst themselves. Loved it every time Edward came up behind Bella and hugged her or gave her a kiss. Awwww! Adored how Charlie and Maggie got along, and I am thinking that maybe, just maybe, Charlie and Renee see Maggie already as a sort of granddaughter! Charlie even hugged her! Adored that Jasper was just sitting there staring at Alice, and Bella picked up on it! Perfect introduction and then, wham, departure. They are already behaving like one big happy family, and I'm sure the holidays are going to be spectacular together! The little mistletoe kissing was aweesssoooommmeee! It seems that Jasper and Alice are being left alone so I wonder where they will be in the morning, lol..well, they just met, but hell, Edward and Bella had a pretty steamy first, er, kitchen date together, so who knows...haha. Loving story, and the love that exists here, and Elizabeth might be thinking the same thing we are...hmmm...babies on the horizon. Love it all! xoxo
| Shemilliah chapter 30 . 5/14/2013
Love love love the way this story is taking form.
They are all coming together as a living family.
Maggie sticking up for Bella, icing on the cake. But the Chief getting wrapped round maggie's lil finger priceless!