Oh how I love Rumple :D I hope you do some chapters from Belle's perspective too!

I absolutely loved this begining, beautifully written. I didn't mind at all that thecharacterization is a bit off, since the changed past circumstances do warrant it, and the couple still sound like themselves regardless. In fact, I hope you'll include flashbacks in the style of the show - containing Belle as the Dark One's wife; I'm curious to see if the reputation you gave her is justified at all, or mostly by association. I hope for the latter, though I say "mostly" because I don't think she can realisticaly be completely "pure" as Rumple's wife (and "pure" is boring). I look forward to the next chapter.

Has the makings of a most excellent story and I look forward to seeing what you do with it

Love it! Ever since i saw that episode i've wondered what would happen if Rum had rescued Belle!

Wow just wow I didn't know what to expect from the summary but...wow...I LOVED IT please continue

I'll definitely be riding along! Loved it

So good. for the next chapter!

More, more, more! please, more!

I'll buy a Ticket! I love Rumbelle are married during the series stories!

Awesome! Please update this story soon please!:)

Very interesting and well written, I liked it, good job :)