|Reviews for The Last Human: A Tale of the Pre-Classical Era|
| Phallus of Malice chapter 18 . 3/10
This plot's getting thicker than Paula Dean!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
| WyldClaw chapter 1 . 1/25
poor fines/ It can't have been easy for him tp hear light heart and topsoil's words
| Phallus of Malice chapter 16 . 12/21/2013
This is the most beautiful story I have ever read.
Granted, that list is not very big, but the point still stands.
When is your next update, that is, if you are even continuing.
| Trar chapter 13 . 9/30/2013
Another damn good chapter. I noticed only one or two grammar slip-ups, and I don't have much else to say other than I want to know what happens next.
| Trar chapter 12 . 8/21/2013
While I realized a couple chapters back that this story is basically an analogue to The Last of the Unicorns, it's still a delightful read. Especially that last line.
| Shadow Erk chapter 12 . 8/19/2013
Aaaggggggg... I am terrible at writing reveiews, so I only do so for stories that I love,
Patchwork, This is amazing, this Is the #1 story I am following right now, I have read many fanfictions, too many, and so little of them read like an actualy story, most just come across as a raw imagination of what they want to happen. this Is not anything like that, this FEELS like a book, it reads as one.
I surely hope you continue to write, many stories... I follow you on fanfiction, #1 slot, absolutely amazing work, Thank you for writing for the Internet, and for taking the time out of your week, to write.
this story deserves more than this review.
(shadow of a warrior)
| guitarrawr1 chapter 3 . 8/16/2013
very descriptive, must venture on into the depths of this marvellous adventure.
| solaranno chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
Interesting, I know there is more to read but I have to write my thought about the second chapter.
Reminds me a lot of the film "The last Unicorn" (if you have seen it ;) ) Still interesting to see a human in that position.
| Trar chapter 11 . 7/12/2013
Good chapter. It looks like the human has finally met who he seeks. I would have appreciated a clue as to where exactly this city is, but I'm not pressuring you. And do the ponies talk with British accents? Their phonetics make it seem so.
| Oplindenfep chapter 11 . 7/11/2013
"My tutor once found a box of glass spheres capped with metal on the bottom and little brass curls in the center. He hung them from his door as wind chimes." He offered a smug grin. "Everyone told me diamond dogs made them, but I knew better."
| Trar chapter 10 . 6/28/2013
I liked this chapter. Please tell me we're going to be seeing this city. And I couldn't find anything on Google about the 'Caulkin Mountains'. I'd appreciate a clue as to where our intrepid adventurers are in the world.
| Trar chapter 8 . 5/1/2013
Good chapter, even if it's mostly storytelling. I especially enjoyed the allegories to human deer hunters (let's hope there are still some out there). I'd like to see more human ruins, though.
| your mom's trap chapter 8 . 4/20/2013
Not too crazy about how you ended this chapter but I love how you are one of the few that actually edits their work instead of just uploading without a single thought of revision. On that note I must say that I love the story so far and how you have traded quantity for quality and good luck with the rest of the chapters.
| Trar chapter 7 . 3/13/2013
Good chapter; at least for finishing up in the town. Let's hope our hero has more luck with the deer than he has in the past.
| Oplindenfep chapter 7 . 3/9/2013
Well of course the dogs would be sad, one of their ancient masters coming back and then leaving?
Sad as balls for the loyal buggers.