Reviews for Superman: Year One
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Very good I like it and would like to read more
currentlyunknown123 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Please note that the guidelines clearly state that stories containing chat/script format isn't allowed here. If you want to keep the basic premise of your story, you can rewrite it in a format that is accepted.

Random name said, "Blah blah blah."

Quotation marks need to be around the dialogue, dialogue tags are needed, actual description, etc. At the moment this type of story can't stay the way it is on fanfiction. If you don't want to rewrite it, you can do a Google search for places that will allow this type of content and simply remove it from here, and post it on there.

If you decide to leave it here without changing it, your story will be reported for breaking the rules and it may be deleted by a moderator.

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C.A.M.S 22 chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Great start