Zach is literally a son of a bitch. Not him his mom just so there's no comfussion

Really good, but this one little thing is bugging me, its nightmares not night meres :)

I LOVE this. Absolutely wonderful job. You should have like 500 reviews, not two. But whatever. Your story was completely, awesomely, awesomesauce. Love the story line. I love how you kept Zach so in character; not a lot of characters can pull that off. Again, GREAT job!

This is such a sweet story

Oooooh. I loved it! Your writing was terrific! I loved the word choice. It was great. ;)