|Reviews for Good Days, Better Tomorrows|
| magic doors chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
I liked it, to the most part. It was cute, fluffy and had a nice pace to it. The Marauders banter at the beginning was amusing as well! However, I did notice a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes in this piece. (The use of full stops instead of commas after dialogue, misspelt words: jmes instead of James. Lack of capitals.) On the whole, however it was a lovely piece. Thanks for the submission.