|Reviews for Fortunes of the Riddermark|
| ptl4ever419 chapter 20 . 2/7
So here's some food for thought ;) all these questions left unanswered. But will Réodwyn ask to learn swording
| silverswath chapter 20 . 2/4
Still a fun story, but since you asked: "They had rode many hours..." should be "They had ridden many hours...".
About the grass in the last section, should be "shone with a vigorous green", not shown.
You can't do real proofreading with just spellcheck, you need to go through the document slowly and carefully. Though maybe you aren't a native English speaker, in which case you are not to blame for this very confusing language.
| CGKrows chapter 19 . 1/28
It's CGKrows, but close enough! Reodwyn kicked some ass tag-teaming with the horse!
| silverswath chapter 11 . 1/28
This is really a fun read, and an interesting twist on the usual. It does not seem as if you are working with a beta, since there are an awful lot of typos and misuses of near-correct words. And stuff like calling a single person of Rohan a Rohirrim - he would be a Rohir, or a man of the Mark. But, it's still a good story and I had to wrestle myself away from plunging into Chapter 12 and stopping to write this review. I am looking forward to reading more of your story!
| debbiepuff chapter 18 . 1/17
I hope you haven't given up on this story :)
| ptl4ever419 chapter 18 . 11/12/2013
I love your story! It's awesome. Such a cool idea:)
| NightlyRowenTree chapter 18 . 10/24/2013
| quaff chapter 7 . 10/22/2013
This is a fabulous story. Thank you for writing it.
| CGKrows chapter 18 . 10/22/2013
Dude, I approve. Beyond that, will our heroine ever meet battle? Just curious.
| faye50free chapter 17 . 9/28/2013
This chapter was so good you don't want it to come to an end.
| NightlyRowenTree chapter 17 . 9/28/2013
Loved it please please update soon
| PoopIsTastey chapter 17 . 9/28/2013
Aw, I read your story too fast... Now there's nothing left!
By the way, I love the Game of Thrones and Harry Potter references!
I would say update more frequently with shorter chapters, just because otherwise I'll forget everything that's happened. But then at the same time, I love a nice longer chapter, so I don't know.
By the way, I love what I'm presuming the pairing is for this story. It's so subtle and adorable! Keep it up!
| Tierney Greyleaf chapter 16 . 9/26/2013
Keep on writing this story! It is fully awesome!
| CGKrows chapter 17 . 9/28/2013
Welp, I do like longer chapters. It does last longer in my opinion, and it helps move the story along.
As for how I like it, I really love it! Grima was well written in this chapter, truly.
| CGKrows chapter 16 . 9/23/2013
friggin' love this story. Cute as can be, and very believable. Réodwyn is one smart woman! I tip my hat to her in respect. Keep updating!