|Reviews for battle of the mightiest disciples|
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/30/2014
| ndnjtj chapter 10 . 9/1/2014
| Animefan268 chapter 4 . 7/30/2014
The best advice i can give you is proof reading and greatly improve your gamma since every single chapter i read new kind's of grammatical mistakes happen
| Animefan268 chapter 3 . 7/30/2014
Endings on words like dark skinned and while t shirt is fine, t-shirt is the correct spelling and the one you will find if you look it up in a dictionary, very minor mistake word Valkyrie not words single not plural and using his at one point regarding Miu, you have a problem with writing in a consistent time you switch between using both several times in sentences a helping note on this is that direct speech is most of the time present unless explaining what has occurred, This is the mistakes i noticed when reading this chapter
| Animefan268 chapter 2 . 7/30/2014
I think it will be easier commenting in the chapters where i see the mistake, the first think i noticed that is in dire need of improvement is some of your gamma specifically thinks like this "and now your bodies damaged and you are a member of a yomi" most of what you have written isn't bad but then this pooped up, i am quite sure what you tried to write is "and now your body is damaged and you are a member of Yomi", and of course the asgauard which for some reason you got right later in the chapter, and you have several sentences that where hard to understand most likely because of comma mistakes
| brad1990 chapter 10 . 3/19/2014
very good cant wait for more
| Joe chapter 10 . 2/8/2014
Interesting chapter, not really sure Kenichi would have been able to match Tanaka even with that technique as Tanaka is near Master class level. But still can't wait for the next chapter at little disappointed we didn't get to see Kenichis training I was looking forward to what he would learn and how he responded to his new teachers.
| kusanagi.godou.10 chapter 10 . 1/18/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
when are you going to post another chapter its been 3months and 2 days.
| qeadwrsf chapter 9 . 10/15/2013
Nice story, very few stories where Kenichi joins yami.
I just thought of another motive for him to join them. At the end of the DofD tournament Sho was a bit slower and the gunner killed (or at least crippled) both him and Miu, then Kenichi gets mad and wants revenge and joins either Kensei or Hongo .
| Joe chapter 9 . 9/28/2013
Loved the chapter great character assessment of Aagard I could see him sending Kenichi right to Apatchis bedroom door. Can't wait to see how it turns out and how Kenixhi will react to the new additions hope you update soon.
| Joe chapter 7 . 9/28/2013
Great chapter amazing fight scene and nice intro of yomi into Kenichi life.
| Joe chapter 6 . 9/27/2013
Great chapter loved the shigure comment I always loved that pairing and the innuendo in the manga with the bathing together. Hoping you include a lot more of those moments of even some progression I don't know the direction your heading in but hoping for some Kenichi/Multi with renka, mui, rachel, shigure.
| Joe chapter 4 . 9/27/2013
| Joe chapter 3 . 9/27/2013
Good but this isn't how ryouzanpaku would react they would just charge in and destroy any bases they could find for information.