Reviews for What If Tobias was the initiate and Beatrice was his trainer?
guest chapter 8 . 6/26/2015
not saying i hate you, but maybe you should delete the story or write underneath the title and say not compleated so people don't get the wrong idea
Guest chapter 8 . 7/30/2014
TheHungerGames321 chapter 8 . 7/30/2014
Dang, I really liked this story.
PrewalShadeX chapter 7 . 5/10/2014
please update soon!
YY chapter 5 . 11/26/2013
I need more interesting updates...
Bookfanic chapter 7 . 11/19/2013
I like this, its good, but maybe needs a little more editing :) but update soon!
elena.graham8 chapter 7 . 5/27/2013
more? 0-0
Radioactive hearts chapter 7 . 4/23/2013
sdfghjk ohmyglob this is so perf I cant even
Mina Arellano chapter 7 . 3/4/2013
Yay I can't wait for the next chapter please updfate soon!
Guest chapter 7 . 3/1/2013
keep going with this
cuzican chapter 7 . 2/28/2013
cuzican chapter 6 . 2/28/2013
U made a typo...
""For those of you that don't know my name is Eric. I am one of five leaders of the Dauntless." No one says I word, probably because know one wants to try and pick a fight with him. Not even asking for questions, he starts off again."

Yea...I'm that kinda person
Guest chapter 7 . 2/28/2013
update with longer chapters with more four and tris
Guest chapter 7 . 2/28/2013
lol four i see what you did there ;p
please continue ;)
Skwad chapter 6 . 2/28/2013
Uh, in chapter six, Peter says he's Eric in the second to last paragraph...
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