Reviews for His Own Haunted House
fullofcrazyness chapter 4 . 7/13
fullofcrazyness chapter 3 . 7/13
XD those last 3 sentences my gosh.
guardianofdragonlore chapter 5 . 3/26
I doubt he haa so don't get your hopes up.
Alfred Freedoom Jones chapter 5 . 11/21/2014
stargirl247 chapter 5 . 3/26/2014
I'm really curious as to why America is behaving this way...
tokiluv chapter 5 . 1/25/2014
I hope you continue this it's really good!
Jenavive RoseThorne Gemstone chapter 5 . 1/2/2014
I really hope you don't add these pairings in here o.O

Actually... I don't think a pairing would work here (for me) unless this person was in on Alfred's secrets and were as creepy as he was... at least then it'd seem cool to me :D

It would've been cool as well if Canada was in on America's secrets (in fact- helping him out!) but was just covering up for him.

Sorry, crazy ideas.

Anyways, I would really like to see where this goes (and more of Canada)

Jenavive RoseThorne Gemstone chapter 4 . 1/2/2014
What's different about our Provinces and States?

1. We're New World countries, so /something/ should be different than us

2. They're fun to write about- the brattiness is part of the appeal ;D

3. It makes everyone jealous. At the beginning till they see what a hassle they are :3
Guest chapter 5 . 11/17/2013
Update soon please I really love these kind of fics were America is crazy dark and/or smart alas it's always so hard to find any really great ones like this
AnimatorWriter chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
Whoa. Slightly dark. Interesting. I'd love to see where this goes.
A-Non-Mouse chapter 5 . 7/18/2013
By the way, where did Canada go? I think you may have just stopped mentioning him after he says that animals are common in the region... But besides that, you're doing really well! Oh yeah, are you going to have people (preferably Lithuania and Canada) go and explore the area past the third hall on the first floor?
A-Non-Mouse chapter 4 . 7/18/2013
You go, girl! I personally love state OCs, but the version I enjoy the most is when there's only Vermont, Texas, California, the Confederacy, and Hawaii because they were the only ones to have been their own nation at any point in time.
TheHeroicAmerica chapter 5 . 6/12/2013
Hyperness1857 chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
Cool story, plz update soon.
BrOwNiEfOx chapter 5 . 3/17/2013
I love all of your fanfics! You need to update akl of them! XD
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