|Reviews for Forbidden Romance (discontinued)|
| Bookmaster1234 chapter 16 . 12/30/2016
Why is this discontinued?! It is amazing and you have left it on a cliffhanger! It is a very good FanFiction, I have actually read a similar book recently. I really enjoyed it, it was called Nefertiti and is written by Michelle Moran. It is historical fiction ( I love history, I am the daughter of Athena and such a nerd) and tells the history of Nefertiti and her sister mutnodjmet in a very exciting and interesting way and the plot is quite similar to yours. Have you read this book? If so Were you inspired by it? If you have not read it I highly recommend it to you. But anyway, you are a great writer and should be proud of this FanFiction so please continue!
| Daleisacoolgirl chapter 9 . 4/24/2016
That is not a stupid reason to cry
| Daleisacoolgirl chapter 8 . 4/24/2016
Did you know that I am 10 years old. I'm in grade five.
| Daleisacoolgirl chapter 5 . 4/24/2016
Already kissed. They just met.
It should probably be can asks capability and may asks permission. I'm not sure.
| Daleisacoolgirl chapter 4 . 4/24/2016
Blablabla Blabla blablablabla sorry I'm bored
| Daleisacoolgirl chapter 3 . 4/24/2016
I think of comments but forget them after I finish the chapter.
| Daleisacoolgirl chapter 2 . 4/24/2016
Agathe is a nice name
| Daleisacoolgirl chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
This is pretty good.
| ObssessedwithBooks chapter 16 . 9/24/2015
I absolutely LOVED it! incredibly awesome story
HOPE TO SEE YOU CONTINUING THE STORY :)
| MissFangirl chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
Any other hidden fan girls out there?
| juliewise123 chapter 16 . 1/28/2015
love it more please
| Haz chapter 16 . 12/17/2014
For your BIGGEST FAN
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/12/2014
| Angry at writer chapter 16 . 11/28/2014
Post it quickly its the day after 2014 thanksgiving it takes no one so long for a story to be posted
| Angry at writer chapter 10 . 11/28/2014
Never make that happen again do u here