Reviews for Thoughts
NickyFox13 chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
This is a very solid piece. There were some tiny errors here and there including forgotten capital letters, a forgotten period and a forgotten comma. However, the errors didn't take away the fact that this was an interesting insight on both Elders Price and McKinley. Great job, and keep writing :)
hillbythetree chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
I like this fanfic! It's cute enough but not overly sloppy. I think you've got potential talent. Write more!