|Reviews for Back to School!|
| Yorkistgirl chapter 41 . 1/22
That is so awful to pick up George!
| Madianna chapter 41 . 1/14
Yay, I am the 101st reviewer!
First of all, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA about the pranks Loki played on the girls! Fake blood, ewwwww! They must have been freaking!
And poor George! He just doesn't want to do anything, does he?
Oh, yes, Warwick, I REALLY believe you'll keep Hal and Mercutio out of trouble! Hal cracked me up when you said how he grabbed a spear and tried to kill the French tour guide!
When you described what everyone was doing when they got home, I read the bit where it went "Clarence was chatting to Edmund, Valmont and Thor, Kate and the other girls" and I thought you'd included Thor as one of the girls! Looool! And by the way, does Harry ever stop saying his prayers? XD
But intriguing build up of events around George! I think I know who's sending the notes, don't you? ;-D
| Guest chapter 41 . 1/14
Loki kicked It's ass. For it to hurt Sigyn cheapens the plot. Guys can be raped too. Try American History X. Try George since It's messed with him. Where's Cathy and Heath?
| Guest chapter 40 . 1/14
Please! No more"It". If It's Loki's Hyde..then stay in Hyde Park to no! Loki and Sigyn..bravo! More more!
| ComedyMonarchy chapter 41 . 1/13
Very good, my favourite part was...actually all of it, I don't have a favourite part it's that good.
Looking forward to the next chapter, plus I can pretty well guess who the figure stalking George is...and I do wonder what IT getting up to?
Come to think of it...what are the other characters up to?
| Yorkistgirl chapter 40 . 1/13
Thank goodness Richard is the only one who shows some sense among this group of
| Madianna chapter 40 . 1/12
Yay, you updated!
I see you used some of the videos you sent me in this chapter! Very funny! Haha. I quite liked Loki reading Jekyll and Hyde. And I liked the little exchange between him and Sigyn, it was very sweet, and the hints for what he's going to do with Theoric.
Oooooh, I can sense the build up for what's going to happen between George and Lennie! You can see how George is failing without his best friend, poor guy. Unfortunately, it's not going to get better for a while.
I would have liked to have seen the Gang being naughty on the ferry! Whenever we used to go to France with my school we would run up and down the corridors, buy dirt cheap chocolate and play spy on the teachers! Oh, and we'd go up on deck and take silly pictures! XD
The scene with the Gang picking there rooms was hilarious! I have a feeling that Hermia and Geoff will certainly be going out in the night into each other's rooms, and that Warwick will not be impressed. Plus the bit with Mercutio jumping on the bed was hilarious! Like in Child Swap!
My favourite line was "I hope you like sharing beds, Hal!"
Hmmm...I wonder what Loki's done?
Wow, Tudor is crazy! I liked the conversation between him and Ned, though.
You ended on a cliffhanger! I bet that was Lennie outside!
| ComedyMonarchy chapter 40 . 1/12
Very good, Tudor's changed, Geroge is going through a mental breakdown.
It is up to no good again, I want to see Jekyll and Hyde come into reality...I do wonder what's going on at home...with the baby under the protection of York.
I would also point out that the Aliance isn't dead, Edouard maybe in hospital, but his friends aren't...and the entire gang is in France for two months!
| Yorkistgirl chapter 39 . 12/15/2013
I'm sure they will not behave good in France... Very good once again!
| Madianna chapter 39 . 12/14/2013
Awwwww! The first part of this chapter was beautiful! Richard was so sweet and protective of Anne and little Neddie! It's so lovely to see them bonding as a family!
And Ned himself was so sweet, telling Richard they needed to stick together! But I can't help but wonder what the mean Lancastrian lords will do! Will Hal step in and make sure they're on their best behaviour?
Aaaah, so I see we meet some certain new characters! Ooooh, I sense some upcoming drama! Christine is a real sweetie, but I can tell Mollie will be a bitch!
The exchange between Sigyn and Loki was amusing! Are they going to France as well, I wonder?
And the France adventure begins! Yes! This is going to be amazing! I can't to see how you incorporate some of the scenes you've shown me into this! The bit with York, Richard, Anne and Neddie was so touching. You can easily see how they are each other's worlds!
Edouard's in a coma?! Ooooh, I bet Margaret is pissed! I wonder if it will have any lasting effects for him, like if he'll have to learn to walk again, etc. Wouldn't it be hilarious if all the other Lancasters had to help him do stuff like going to the toilet? Hal, Tudor and Harry would all throw up!
But I am still so excited to see what pranks Hal is going to play on the Frenchies!
| ComedyMonarchy chapter 39 . 12/13/2013
Well...(with a mischievous grin) it would see things are going well...but I wouldn't hold myself to it...Brutal Clifford, cunning Somerset and the reversed Northumberland, who's full potential is yet to be unleashed, this Molly...she sees to pretty bland...for now. Well lets see how Margaret of Anjou reacts, I would really like to see the talk between her and C, S and N.
Is Lennie's dead...maybe yes or maybe no.
Why would Hal look forward going to France, he wouldn't last three minutes on French soil!
Keep it up...I like there is going...if its actually going somewhere that is. :)
| Guest chapter 39 . 12/12/2013
Hm. More Loki and sigyn!Lennie and George have more time..tch. Artistic license. Marvel's Loki's Odin's adopted son. Mythically, he's his blood brother. Why not Eduord for a dad? More drama..ehehe.
| Guest chapter 38 . 12/1/2013
In Chapter 36, Loki seems he used some magic on Anne's says Ed's the Thor, science and magic are the same. Dna would be effected. Clarify please. Ed as a dad would be more funnier.
| Madianna chapter 38 . 12/1/2013
What an amazing chapter! Yes, Richard's the daddy! The whole reaction to his fatherhood was hilarious, with the Yorkist brothers all being like "Oh no! Dad's going to kill me/you!" I'm sure the grand old Duke of York will love little Neddy though!
I also want to know what Warwick will think. Is he going to be mad at Richard for knocking Anne up, or pleased the baby isn't Edouard's? I'm surprised no one has attacked Edouard yet after finding out what he did to Anne. Hopefully Hal will find some rule where he can disown him. Mwahahahaha! Or should I say, ehehehehe!
Mean Tudor! Yelling at Richard and jumping to conclusion like that! I do feel his pain though. And his interactions with Lizzie were so sweet! I particularly liked the line...
"I was told that all Lancastrians are evil and ugly: like Prince Edouard"
"Because you don't look evil. Or ugly."
"Unbelievable. The only person besides my mother to tell me that is an 11-year-old girl. I must be truly blessed…"
But I'm still mad at him for yelling at Richard when he had his baby in the room! Anyway, for next chapter, keep up the great work, and I want to see Richard, Anne, and little Neddy adjusting to being a family. It would be so cute, especially if Richard was being all protective, like "I'll never let Edouard hurt you, etc"
| Yorkistgirl chapter 38 . 12/1/2013
When the doctor said that Richard is the baby's dad, I was like: "Man, you are history..."
Didn't they thought at school how to use condoms?