Reviews for And He Lost His Cherry
amblewat chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
Oh snickers. that was funny. nice job
Mark Owens chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Very very funny and well constructed chapter the author has an great tounge in cheek sence of humor
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
"It can snap" is the inside joke between me and my friends
KiethBlackLion chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
That was great. I really liked your use of ambiguous descriptions. You had me guessing as to what the guys were really making in the kitchen. Well done.
SallyOn chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
This was too funny, from start to finish! The lead in, with Larmina & Allura's conversation was the perfect set up for the story. Of course, I am all about eavesdropping, so that only made it better.

Your writing did a good job of opening up all kinds of mental imagery.

Thank you for a smile in the middle of my day.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
OMG that was hilarious!
thisaccounthasbeenclosedforeve chapter 1 . 10/7/2012


So. Dirty. Minded.

NinjaCopter chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
This story made me laugh... great story... *thumbs up*
Drowningblonde chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Very funny, even though I knew it was going to turn out 'innocent' at the end, your use of double entandre was very well executed!
KathDMD chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
THIS was super cute and way funny! Thanks for the laugh.
SnyperLady chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Something told me it was sandwiches and sundaes, but it was still cute.
AlluraBlue4 chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Creative. Cute. Well executed, although I had the feeling right away that they were talking about sandwiches and sundaes. Thanks for sharing. I always enjoy a fun, light-hearted piece.