Reviews for Persona 5: Mystery of the heart
TerriblePersonExtraordinaire chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
I think you might want to clean it up a bit, the sentences are like this:

"Rose blah blah blah did

something."

It's a bit jarring. And why is her name Rose? Isn't she Japanese?
(For the love of god DON'T make her an American exchange student!)
Other than that, it's interesting.
Zanegar chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Hmmmmm interesting idea for persona 5.