Reviews for Luffy Comes to Visit
Guest chapter 3 . 5/26
I love it, when are you gonna post again?
Titania1796 chapter 3 . 5/6
Actualiza pronto esta muy bueno el fic
Guest chapter 3 . 4/4
Vai volta e terminar de escrever não ?
Guest chapter 3 . 3/12
Great story please update!
tanithlipsky chapter 3 . 1/7
funny start. good.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/24/2016
wow.. i jst love luffy and marco part..
its best..
update soon
Guest chapter 3 . 10/28/2016
People who called luffy must be thinking that they are scrwed that was funny
Tidde13 chapter 3 . 10/12/2016
I know, it's been 3 years but I really like this story, even though you've only posted 3 chapters...I've been keeping an eye out for new updates but seeing as one never came I decided to write this review in hopes of you seeing it someday/somehow...:)

Anyway, I just want you to know that I really like where this is going and am still waiting for the next chapter...:) Thank you for writing.
kandita chapter 3 . 7/15/2016
Pretty good so far
Killer-Sangwoo chapter 3 . 7/10/2016
please update!
Fangirl101 chapter 3 . 7/9/2016
Oh mai od plez continue with this story ive been waiting for the next chapter for 4 months now! THE SUSPENCE IS KILLIN ME!
kagome higurashi chapter 3 . 5/26/2016
please write some more. it's good.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/7/2016
When is the next chapter coming
Guest chapter 3 . 5/4/2016
Can I ask when is the next chapter is coming
ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 3 . 3/29/2016
pllllllease update soon! this book is awesome and I want to see Ace and Luffy talk and goof off together!
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