Reviews for The tragedy of Moanna's mother
Meredith chapter 1 . 1/2
This is not very good. It sounds like it was written by an 8 year old
Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
kinda stupit, why would her mother want to kill her?
their world was suppost to be no painfull!
sorry but i didnt like it...
LuluCalliope chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
This was amazingly good, but it cannot be a one-shot. It needs to be explored more: the new character relationships, this shocking reveal, and Moanna's transformation. The story feels cramped. Let it grow a little.

But like I said, even ended on a sort-of cliffhanger.