Reviews for The tragedy of Moanna's mother
Lokidaughter13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
Can you please make a chapter story as a sequal to this? I would love to see what happened after this.
ChildOfMay chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
interesting ha, but you should have given it alittle more back story to better explain things you know? maybe you should make this a story to better elaborate. just add a little more detail and it will be a very good story i would like to read. but other then that it was okay.
Meredith chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
This is not very good. It sounds like it was written by an 8 year old
Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
kinda stupit, why would her mother want to kill her?
their world was suppost to be no painfull!
sorry but i didnt like it...
LuluCalliope chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
This was amazingly good, but it cannot be a one-shot. It needs to be explored more: the new character relationships, this shocking reveal, and Moanna's transformation. The story feels cramped. Let it grow a little.

But like I said, even ended on a sort-of cliffhanger.