Reviews for Unexpected Assistance |
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![]() ![]() Great story, hope you write many more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really fun story! Enjoyed it immensely... |
![]() ![]() OMAKE: Then Harry turned to the minister: "So, MISTER Fudge, aren't you glad that you didn't give death eater Snape an Order of Merlin, after he has, as is proven now beyond doubt, lied to you about the events last year in the Shrieking Shack?" Fudge's puce face, in contrast to his lime green robes, did nothing to improve his reputation. Or was it because he AGAIN believed a death eater? Furious beyond words, Fudge stormed away, back to his office to hide in, with his trusted toad at his side who told him nothing but what he wanted to hear, ignoring everything else. Thus, business as usual was restored. |
![]() ![]() The Killing Curse for slaughtering animals is a bad choice. Meat animals for slaughter aren't killed and then just cut open. They are stunned, have a large blood vessel opened and die of exsanguination by having the heart pump out the blood, which cannot happen if the animal is dead. That's why wild animals' carcasses that are bagged during a hunt have different rules and laws for being processed, at least in my country. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderfull story, thank you for your writing. Especialyy love, hiow your portray the main characters - Greengrasses, Tracey and Delacours. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “He just reaped the whirlwind” Yikes, that was lame. Can’t wait to see how malfoy dies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm back for a reread and I had a blast! I really enjoyed myself and I laughed out loud as Draco died. Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that they are learning the unforgivables. Meekly taking the abuse is what is shown in too much fanfic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keeping a stiff upper lip while being publicly humiliated. Once Potter responds Snape jumps in to belittle Potter Sr. The fic is very enjoyable for that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() Draco kills Daphne and the only thing that is done is he is cast out of his family, is that a joke? What drugs were you on when you wrote this chapter? I want some. |