| Reviews for Unexpected Assistance |
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   NulledVoid chapter 12 . 8/5 good |
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/23 Thanks for sharing. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/23 Draco kills Daphne and the only thing that is done is he is cast out of his family, is that a joke? What drugs were you on when you wrote this chapter? I want some. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/23 Not going to have Hermione apologize for being a bitch? |
| WhatHaveIDiscovered chapter 12 . 3/7 Really enjoyed this one. Well done and thanks for sharing! |
| WhatHaveIDiscovered chapter 6 . 3/7 What a way to start the new term! Liking the story so far, and look forward to the rest. |
| Saissa chapter 11 . 3/3 This review is for Chapter 12 - SPOILERS! Harry should NEVER have released the moron from the life debt, they are called LIFE DEBTS for a reason! Otherwise this was a wonderful story! Cannot believe I have never read this before! |
| E.Elliot chapter 12 . 2/3 I love it!thanks for the amazing story! |
| KoldT chapter 12 . 1/21 Very enjoyable story. |
| noylj chapter 12 . 9/5/2022 Tracey? Where did she come from. I could see Stori and Gabbi in a few years |
| K chapter 12 . 8/30/2022 A very enjoyable story. A nice variation on the canon. |
| BlazeStryker chapter 8 . 8/27/2022 If I haven't explained my Policy toward completed tales of Headbastards, I will do so now. I don't give an arsenic-laced suppository why a Headbastard's a bastard. I don't like snarling at writers that haven't finished. Once the tale's done, the radioactive cess that is a Headbastard is fair game. Greater Good! Gangrene is a better good than the Greater Good as gangrene at least exists. |
| Critical reader chapter 12 . 8/17/2022 Granted this story is almost 10 years old, but the main ideas of Lordship and double marriage were cliches already back then. I don't understand why you had to make it even a menage-a-quatre in the end. You've got some good action and some interesting twists, the writing is not too shabby, either, but all in all, it's just another variation on a theme. There was potential for more. |
| Aust Sakura Kyzor chapter 3 . 7/13/2022 That's not how defibs work. The purpose of a defibrillator is to stop your heart from beating too fast and too erratically, (ie, stop it from fibrillating). All it would do to a stopped heart is keep it stopped. The only way to get a heart beating again is CPR. Chest compressions etc. |
| AlukaXD chapter 5 . 7/4/2022 This brought the healer up short. Never in her career as a mediwitch had she ever seen someone brought back from cardiac arrest Wow, how stupid can Wizard's be to never think of CHEST COMPRESSIONS |