Reviews for Unexpected Assistance
NulledVoid chapter 12 . 8/5
good
Guest chapter 12 . 4/23
Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/23
Draco kills Daphne and the only thing that is done is he is cast out of his family, is that a joke? What drugs were you on when you wrote this chapter? I want some.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/23
Not going to have Hermione apologize for being a bitch?
WhatHaveIDiscovered chapter 12 . 3/7
Really enjoyed this one. Well done and thanks for sharing!
WhatHaveIDiscovered chapter 6 . 3/7
What a way to start the new term! Liking the story so far, and look forward to the rest.
Saissa chapter 11 . 3/3
This review is for Chapter 12 - SPOILERS!

Harry should NEVER have released the moron from the life debt, they are called LIFE DEBTS for a reason!

Otherwise this was a wonderful story! Cannot believe I have never read this before!
E.Elliot chapter 12 . 2/3
I love it!thanks for the amazing story!
KoldT chapter 12 . 1/21
Very enjoyable story.
noylj chapter 12 . 9/5/2022
Tracey? Where did she come from. I could see Stori and Gabbi in a few years
K chapter 12 . 8/30/2022
A very enjoyable story. A nice variation on the canon.
BlazeStryker chapter 8 . 8/27/2022
If I haven't explained my Policy toward completed tales of Headbastards, I will do so now.

I don't give an arsenic-laced suppository why a Headbastard's a bastard. I don't like snarling at writers that haven't finished. Once the tale's done, the radioactive cess that is a Headbastard is fair game.

Greater Good! Gangrene is a better good than the Greater Good as gangrene at least exists.
Critical reader chapter 12 . 8/17/2022
Granted this story is almost 10 years old, but the main ideas of Lordship and double marriage were cliches already back then. I don't understand why you had to make it even a menage-a-quatre in the end. You've got some good action and some interesting twists, the writing is not too shabby, either, but all in all, it's just another variation on a theme. There was potential for more.
Aust Sakura Kyzor chapter 3 . 7/13/2022
That's not how defibs work. The purpose of a defibrillator is to stop your heart from beating too fast and too erratically, (ie, stop it from fibrillating). All it would do to a stopped heart is keep it stopped. The only way to get a heart beating again is CPR. Chest compressions etc.
AlukaXD chapter 5 . 7/4/2022
This brought the healer up short. Never in her career as a mediwitch had she ever seen someone brought back from cardiac arrest

Wow, how stupid can Wizard's be to never think of CHEST COMPRESSIONS
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