|Reviews for The Living Dream|
| GeekyGamerCat chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
quick no body reports this to the foster home!
| GeekyGamerCat chapter 3 . 1/6/2013
"Names Sonic, Sonic the hedgehog"
"Wow... You're the insurance hedgehog !? Well what ever that means.."
best line ever
| GeekyGamerCat chapter 2 . 1/6/2013
he sounds so cute!
| GeekyGamerCat chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I bet shadow thinking 'I hate you all'. xD
| Shadow-of-death060 chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
i really like your story and do hope you post another chapter soon...
| Swan7 chapter 3 . 11/3/2012
YAY! COOKIES! ;D
| xcaliber234 chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
A nice idea, however there are a lot of grammatical errors, I'd advice getting someone to look at your work before publishing a new chapter. Good luck with your future projects.
| Swan7 chapter 2 . 10/13/2012
Awesome! I love how you wrote chapter 2! ;)
| IHeartRainbowsNSkittles chapter 2 . 10/9/2012
Awwww Shadow & Sonic are parents _
Can't wait to see where this story goes
| IHeartRainbowsNSkittles chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Uh oh Shadow
I wonder who's the child 0.0
| Lucy Labrador chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
This seems very unlikely. It's like Sonic to make reckless bets, but not The Commander.
I think it should have been an experiment that The Commander wanted to conduct, not a ramdom bet.
Plus, you don't put exclaimation marks.
'Like this ! It's wrong.'
You don't need a space before them!
Also... in certain cases it's 'You're' not Your. When they're saying 'You Are' it's You're.
Apart from that,it's okay! Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Swan7 chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
WOW! Can't believe it! I've gotta hear more!"The bet is on!"