Good so far best of luck with your story :)

Awesome work! Update please!

I loved these chapters! They were totally cool! That is one original idea. Good work!
P.S Sometimes the pronouns are getting mixed up. So it's like Percy is saying them instead of the monster. Other than that i appreciate what you've done.

I like how you divided the Chimera into two brains and made them so different I never would have thought of that!

This one was weird. I totally feel as if my IQ just dropped a couple of points. Nice work though. Looking forward to more chapters.

P.S. Glad to have you back and updating.

İ thought the Minotaur couldn't even think straight! Lol. Keep going.

Oh, please update! I really love this.
Very original(wish I had thought of this...) Good job!

Awesome! I've never seen anything like this before- it's very original and creative. However, there were a few points in the fourth chapter that made it sound as if Percy were telling it, because you used 'her' instead of 'me' or 'I'. Great job, though, I love it!

please update! this is so original and creative, and the pov's of the monsters all make sense! UPDATE! :)

please update!

Dude this is amazing. i can actually imagine the monsters thinking of all this as they fight. so please continue writing and update soon

Nice work with the Hellhound.

Doing good.

I love this story! Great job!

That was actually pretty good. I would love to see these chapters get longer with the more 'intelligent' monsters.