Reviews for Broken Worlds
SilverWolf-Ryuki chapter 13 . 6/12/2004
Wow...that was such a good story...

i agree for the fact that tamers should have more than one season. I mean, they RULE! so does your story, of course. You know, we could make this into a movie and it would be an instant hit...XD so sad that its over. Me gonna check if you wrote any more stories...
SilverWolf-Ryuki chapter 12 . 6/12/2004

that was so kawaii! i think im gonna laugh and cry at the same time! gosh, you make good cliff hangers...meh, cant wait to read on. _~
SilverWolf-Ryuki chapter 8 . 6/12/2004


You have just drained me of all my belief of any talents i i feel so stupid...

anyways...that was really really really good so far. I found 2 mistakes in 8 chapters, but still, thats better than i have ever done.

I love your plot, and the relationship between all the characters. Its starting to sound like a Jenrya, Rika and Ryo triangle. But hey, im still readin on. I am so addicted to this story!

Anyhoo...I'll suggest it to my friends. I guess the reason why you dont reviews is because of the catigory, or maybe even the story summary. I know from personal experience. But still, your story is the BEST i have read in a long time. I cant wait to finish it!

hmm...that was a long review...anyhoo...


OmnicromXR chapter 13 . 10/8/2003
Brings a tear to my stony face. Not many stories can touch me like many of yours have. Remember, Dejimon Tamers ITSUDEMU!
RaspberryGirl chapter 1 . 9/25/2002
Interesting story. However, I think you need to work on sentence length. The writing also lacks a bit of depth and excitement. And maybe there was some other way you could have had all the Chosen come together in a more interesting way than just introducing them all one by one in the prologue. But oh well.
phantom raider chapter 13 . 9/19/2002
man, i haven't read a story this good in a while. good job and keep it up!
Arabella Silverbell chapter 13 . 9/16/2002
*sniffles* the ending is so incredible! got any more wonderful stories like this one?
Arabella Silverbell chapter 12 . 9/12/2002
this is going so well! i just can't seem to find any fault in this! continue!
Arabella Silverbell chapter 10 . 9/5/2002
i just love your fic! please, please, please continue!
Me chapter 9 . 8/25/2002
Totally great story!

Ya better continue!
Guest chapter 9 . 8/25/2002
This is one of the best stories that I have ever read and I am seriously picky about certain stories, but this one has an excellent plot. Hope you update update soon! I just love Ryuki.
Arabella Silverbell chapter 9 . 8/21/2002
yay! ai and makoto are here, too! they're ALL together now! and for some weird reason... hirokazu just pisses me off... anyways, continue!
Ikyutakei chapter 9 . 8/21/2002
Hi! Please continue! anyway, you can't be 'half dead', your are either alive, dying, or dead...What the? I sound exactly like my brother! AHH! Bye-Bye
First Star chapter 9 . 8/21/2002
this is absolute brilliance, as usual! keep it up!
Arabella Silverbell chapter 8 . 8/15/2002
poor ruki... shuichon still hates her...

anyways, continue!
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