|Reviews for The Monster You Let In|
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/25
Really nice, sexy and nice. Please keep writing
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/25
Really touching well done
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/25
| Dutchie chapter 7 . 2/11
Way cool story. Loved it. Keep up the good work. John & Joss forever!
| 007Renji chapter 7 . 1/8
this is the best story I just read so far, I love to see Reese have a scenes with taylor. I just love seeing Reese/Taylor bonding and the father/son thing, love that he finally have a family to come home too. I just wish we see this on the effin show.
| ReadtoRelax chapter 7 . 12/13/2013
Great story. Loved the closed door conversation. Some times the heart to heart conversation are easier if the are not face-to-face.
| Naeryse chapter 7 . 10/17/2013
What a lovely story! This is actually my first time reading a Carter/Reese fic!
I love how everyone was in character, I felt like I could actually see and hear them especially Finch with his dry humour and manner of speaking, and taking care of his team members. It was great surprise to see Donnelly here too!
We've seen tears well up in John's eyes in the series but I just knew it would take Carter getting severely hurt and his guilt over it to actually make them fall, unfortunately.
Carter's influence on Reese was illustrated really well here, there's no way that guy would've been still alive, but that didn't mean he would get away pain free *laugh*. Speaking of Carter, It felt just like her to believe John was staying and helping to take care of her out of guilt, I'm glad they worked that
out in the way that they did - those words needed to be said.
I love that John wanted to be a father to Taylor, and they actually ended up getting along, plus with Finch helping with Taylor's homework, and Fusco coming over for the dinner party, they really felt like a happy family, I loved that warmness there -the detective who had no backup in the beginning of the series has come along way to have all of this.
It also made me smile to hear John Finch's line in the series 'do you ever knock?'
I'm sorry for rambling, there was quite a bit I wanted to say and I'm very glad to have come across your story, it just warmed my heart reading.
| LimePalmtree chapter 7 . 9/1/2013
Great story. John and Joss are one of my favorite couple to read about. I am enjoying your stories.
| Misery Loathes Company chapter 7 . 8/11/2013
OMG, this was so sweet (after all the painful stuff, of course!).
| jjbenzix7 chapter 7 . 6/5/2013
Help me...somebody...anybody...This story captivated my mind, heart and body. I am in a daze right now. When I got to the end, I was like, Nooooooo! This cannot stop here! I was trying to will two or three more chapters. This was a magnificent read! Thank you for posting this SWWoman. Thank you.
P.S. I am almost finished with my first fan fiction POI story. I have been working on it for two months now. If I can quit editing, maybe I will be able to post my story soon.
Again, magnificent story! Loved every minute of it!
| jjbenzix7 chapter 6 . 6/5/2013
Oh God, oh God, oh God! Hyperventilating again...need air! OMG! This knocked me off my feet! OMG! OMG! I cannot find words to describe what I am feeling right now. OMG! You nailed it! I know...I really do need POI Intervention right now. All I can say is...Wow!
| jjbenzix7 chapter 5 . 6/5/2013
I like how you captivated a relationship between Carter and each of the characters who stopped in to visit with her. My favorite is when she and Harold spent the evening watching a Humphrey Bogart marathon while eating popcorn together. I could almost picture what that would like on screen. And then how Finch connected with her son Taylor, helping him with his homework. This was such a heartwarming chapter. After the last chapter left me hyperventilating, I needed a moment to calm down. Love it.
| jjbenzix7 chapter 4 . 6/5/2013
She talks! Yes! And the fine sip of wine that is so soothing at the end is when he says, "I'll be right here. Always." I haven't jumped up dancing like that in a long time. Moving on to the next chapter.
| jjbenzix7 chapter 3 . 6/5/2013
OMG! I love it when you wrote the part where Finch ask Reese what his plans are, and he answers in usual "John Reese" fashion, "Find Hagman. Kill Hagman. Then come back here and sit with Joss some more." I almost fell off my chair. I was like, "That's him. That is the John Reese I have come to love! Wow! Unbelievable. Having such a good time reading this, I cannot wait to read the next couple of chapters.
| jjbenzix7 chapter 2 . 6/5/2013
This story is getting good! I can't stop myself. This chapter had me in tears. I was lost for awhile, trying to will Carter back to good health, immediately. This is magnificent reading. Again, Love it!