I still don't get this betrayal of daphne's, I fail to see how it benefits her or her family at all logically speaking.

With money being an issue, it boggles the mind that a fanfic enthusiast wouldn’t immediately start harvesting the lost money, gems, valuables, antiques, etc. from the RoR.

I think this is my favorite SI and I'm glad I decided to read it again.

The impression from the first chapter? The MC is a total retard.

How dare you break my heart like this! This is genuinely the first OC/SI fic where they actually sacrifice themselves and that's it.

If I had the skill, I would write a fanfic of this fanfic where its 202X and Hermione goes to address she was given and sees William, alive and 19. I imagine that they were all in the same world the whole time and after Will dies he just wakes up right back where he was, like it had all been a dream. He goes back to his normal life until a bushy haired woman in her early 40s comes to change his life all over again. I just can't decide whether they'd be friends, Hermione got divorced from Harry years ago and gets with Will, or my guilty fantasy of a throuple.

Never really liked the idea of Will ending up in yet another world and, from a quick glance, it seems like the sequel fic never went anywhere, but I might still give it a read in the future. 8/10, an easy recommendation for SI/OC fanfic readers; good pacing, great characterization, and left me wanting so much more and yet content with what we got.

I love your story. Is one of the best stories I've read. I hope you see this. I hope still alive mate. I wish I found this story sooner. hope you're doing well. really wish we could have gotten that sequel.

His name should have been Hugh Janus.

n that killed it for me. Sorta died when he suddenly gave up all his secrets to hermione, just by her saying something random and looking cross... I actually thought this was a veratasium poisoning plot by herm. Then you had the weird love triangle thing. meh. killed the immersion, so I looked up the reviews and saw the comments for the ending, and I'll pass. Was written quite well and made me lol quite a bit. Shame for the directions tho.

I really enjoyed this story! Nicely written! It seemed to drag on a bit in the middle, but I think I was just impatient! Loved the end!

You know, I've recently began reading SI fanfics. I thought I hated them, but after reading a couple of GoT ones, I realized what the issue was. People hate MarySue's, but SI, good SI at least, like yours for example, aren't trying to act "normal normal" within canon. The good SI are like B movies, they aren't trying to be A rated, they enjoy the fact they are B movies.
Your story is of someone normal jumping into a world they know from A to Z, and they act upon it in a much more interesting way than the typical "everyone mysteriously loves me because im so awesome and [insert favorite character] loves me just because".
I like your writing style and your sense of humor (americanisms and all xD). Your type of SI should prevail.

So... odds you are still working on the sequel? Last time u read this there wasn't a chapter 28 authors note and now I'm desperate

Way. Way too late to the party. Just. Come on, man. 50 fanfictions and you never thought about either selling stuff from the come - and - go-room, or just flat out asking it for money? From the point of view of the MC, he has to plan for the worst and assume he's stuck, so he'll need money and a vault. So this is disappointing.

I dont know how to feel aboht this…

I cried, i cried so hard. Let this be a validation or a testament to the beauty of your work, and Thank You for this piece of Art

How can a HP fanfic reader not know about the room of requirements, it literally has the diadem horcrux in it and everything else a person could need. I wouldn't be surprised if there is millions of Galleons worth of money in there from the centuries the school has been operating. Not to mention the books, robes, and numerous other things. Saying you don't know about the rooms potential to have whatever you need and where it is is complete heresy I tell you.