Excellent story! I have to admit I shed a tear or two at the end. I really loved what you did with Hermione scar.

"There are no couples among us"
FOR FUCKS SAKE

Well now I'm crying

I've always been a sucker for a converted draco

Ah how I love induced chaos

Pfft

Yeah this story is utter ass. I see you have done some self reflection on the bad parts of the story, but you obviously don't think that anything is wrong with what you wrote.
In some points you even contradict the conssesions you made on earlier points. It's honestly so dishonest and disgusting.

Yup...it's always one of those cliches that derail the entirety of a fic. I had a few worries about how things were being presented but pushed on only to be shown this. The way this chapter went was disappointing to the extreme. I liked the basic writing and concept, but this is where I stop. The cliche of spilling all known info to a character like this is one that just ruins the magic I can sometimes get out of self-insert fics.

OK I can't figure out which is worse, your awefull drop-in method or your characters name. Their both truly terrible, so bad I don't even want to know what else is contained in your writing despite the very interesting synopsis.

Q-Q

That was Hilarious

Did great but what was rons letter

this shit is cool
congratulations ; )

Lovin it️️️️

Love your story so far. Love your characterization. I like the very believable Ron. I love the other characterizations.

As to the answer to your question, why yes, yes I can. I can’t stomach Hermione/Ron. Gin/Harry usually has gin suddenly turning into a ‘cooler, Prettier sporty and understanding Hermione’ wannabe that makes me ill. I don’t necessarily want Ron bashing and a story doesn’t HAVE to be HHr for me to like it, although it helps a lot, but canon pairings means there a 90% chance I’d hate half the story so I’ve avoided reading it until now. Instead I’ve read the dozens of stories based on it, lol.