That was an amazing story.

yup trash ending because the author wants to put a sequel in here so he killed the mc and send him to percy jackson without the memory of being in hp world and apparently that fic sucks so much that the author had to dropped it.
it probably would be better if he just give the mc here an happy ending rather than killing him so to give popularity to the sequel of this fic

Lo dejo tenias una buena idea que arruinaste

En realidad es una mierda tu protagonista, le diste una personalidad de mierda, que está arruinando toda la historia, cuando hablaba con hagrid, pensé que lo hacía apropósito, para que le contará al trío. La versa es como si no conociera los personajes, porque no lo hiciste más inteligente, la verdad que aburre que cometan errores tontos los protagonistas.

La verdad es un mal protagonista de autoinsierto, lo hiciste muy confuso al hacerlo conocer muchos fics, sería más simple si solo conociera el canon.
También si fuera más inteligente y astuto el protagonista, no sabe nada y se hace amigos, cuando el aún tiene claro nada ni como hacer magia, era obvio que sospechar iban sobre el.

La verdad que también es malo el desarrollo del personaje, tuviste que hacer más introspección al comienzo, sobre su reacción, opinión, planificación, etc. También su historia antes de trasmigrar para entender al protagonista.

La verdad espero que no seas como el personaje, parece un niño de 11 que no sabe que hacer, supuestamente era un adulto, pero no sé comporta cómo tal, no sabe planificar, en realidad no es coherente la personalidad que le diste, es muy extraña..

Who the fuck introduces himself like that? "Bud Lerner" would be alright. Never heard someone giving initials.

What kinda of beta OC is this. And why the fuck does he just explain to trio that he pretty knows everything that like ever happened like a lil bitch. He could have lied but nooo he want to be best buddies. All he Is now is a dull beta bitch that just knows stuff

Jesus christ
An alternate title for this story could be "where's my hug"

Great story! I actually did enjoy Daphne fics, it usually feels too pushed, I found myself liking them together. Great relationships, though I did feel a bit bad about the lack of ron. Overall, really well done.

What's the point of trying to be secretive if your character is so bad at it? It's like you're just making an excuse to bring the main characters together with your SI for things rather than having them happen naturally. It's kind of frustrating.

Awesome, and I disagree with most of your self-criticism - this is one of the handful (out of thousands) of fanfics in my Calibre worthy of 5 stars. I do wish you hadn't killed William though, I kinda cried at the final chapters.

Oh, and it's "sic Daphne on you", not "sick Daphne on you". :)

Awesome story! Thanks!

Everyone's saying it's a very sad ending but it's not. I'm crying my eyes out but it's because I'm heartbroken but the ending is NOT sad. A HP fan always wished to redo the plot someway that saves those death. And well..I hope Lerner is happy now T_T

I cried buckets reading the last chapter. The whole story was hilarious and then that ending. I wasn’t prepared for it and now my eyes are all red a puffy from crying. Ugh, you kinda suck. It was great though. The sorting hats tells him he’s a dimension traveler, so why the need to study his body? Either way great job!