Reviews for A Curse of Truth
Kian Xki chapter 10 . 9/5/2020
LOL

Rather than getting an harem William set the out to unlock Hermione's harem route

That is unique

Also the Hermione x Harry shipping does feel kind of wrong, many make this ship in their stories but for some reason you make me think of a troll OC shiping Ron with Ginny for the heck of it

Incest is only good in fiction because of actors being pretty good looking but actually unrelated to each other, but outside of William's brainwashing in this tale i truly felt that Harry held genuine siblings love for Hermione and naturally found it weird to date his sister.

The important part is that you pulled that feeling in this work, something that even cannon failed

In the movies the romance between Ron and Hermione felt like "the guy she dated while her true love was in prison" i remember thinking something along the lines of "that's the wrong guy! Sure he was there when you feel lonely but that's only because you ignored your true love interest in his time of need"

But that isn't here, in this case it genuinely feels thst the only reason Harry is interested in Hermione is William's conditioning (brainwashing)

You did such a good job with the insertion of your OC and his integration in the story (character interaction) that it feels more annoying that OC-kun didn't get the girl and instead chose to self destruc with Hermione's harem ending

At least I know that William doesn't read manga or he would have known better than to turn the story in Shoujo Romance (he would have gone for Shonen Battle in those the Deus Machina will force the good ending)

After all Shoujo Romance is full of idiots, bad taste in men, tragedy, wrong life choices and even more tragedy that will likely come from the wrong life choices

If you are for Shoujo manga i predict:
1) Hermione will get pregnant with Draco's baby
2) Harry will die tragically
3) William will have to heroically sacrifice himself to fill Harry's place in the defeat of Voldemort
4) Neville will not die in this tale... Or he will die together with Luna

LOL

Mmm... Battles make more sense in Shoujo manga, Romance makes more sense in Shonen manga... No wonder Code Gueass was so good, it was the Spin-off to Shirley's love story. XD
Kian Xki chapter 7 . 9/5/2020
You OC has gone OOC

I hope Hermione gave him veritaseum or you just did one of the worst things ever

I have no idea how this would be named but the important part is that you had your character keep secrets but then did a complete turn and spilled everything
Cauti0n chapter 28 . 9/1/2020
10/10
The Incedible Mr BassMan chapter 28 . 8/31/2020
I honestly think its a crime u didnt post and or finhish the sequel, unless im missing anything else on ur profile, but i know that life sucks sometimes sooo...

Still the best SI fic i hv read in this site, feels very much like a novel, again, a crime it hasnt been finished
odonnellzoo99 chapter 28 . 8/26/2020
The scene with Hermione makes a good omake, but it would have definitely caused plot issues. Good call not going with it in the story.
odonnellzoo99 chapter 27 . 8/26/2020
I really enjoyed this. I've rarely laughed out loud so often reading fan fiction, but the drama was also done well.
I was concerned about the all too common "weak finish" to an otherwise enjoyable story, but you delivered to the end.
Thank you for sharing your creativity.
Watermelonninja chapter 9 . 8/21/2020
The interaction with some of the characters feels too forced.
dorrel chapter 28 . 8/16/2020
This was great! Easily one of the best I've read. Plenty of humour and the romance was great, too!
mojones2119 chapter 3 . 8/9/2020
As usual and unfortunately, Hermione is so freaking obnoxious that I’m dumping out. Made it to end of chapter 3 but that’s it. Sorry!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2020
What does he look like? you didn't say anything about his looks at all.
la araa chapter 7 . 7/23/2020
El personaje es una mierda, y me acordé de por que no me gustan los personajes " buenos" en Harry Potter , siempre es lo mismo, ayuda al trío, siempre con miedo de cambiar el canon, parece nunca tener un poco de inteligencia , será débil para no afectar la trama, arrastrandose como un perro con el trío, etc ía seguir escribiendo mucho más, pero es demasiado.
Para los lectores le advierto que si no te gusta que un SI o OC cuente sus secretos esto no es para ti( nunca entendí por qué los autores creen que es bueno decirles que sabe todo por qué lo leyó en un libro, aún no lo dice, pero como se comporta el mc es 100% seguro que lo hará de una forma o otra). Mas que nada por lo último pienso que la historia no llaga a tener ni la mitad de los lectores que tal vez tendría .Bye
Kahizzie chapter 28 . 7/17/2020
brilliant ending, pulled the fuck outta my heart strings at the end though, I love the way you shaped all of the characters personalities based on his insert into the hp universe, sure of the best work I have read with a satisfying ending, is old now, but don't ever knock the classics
Debojit chapter 3 . 7/7/2020
Dropped at chapter 3. Who the fuck tells people their secrets! And why do you have to allow people to boss you around. I never been a fan of this and never will be. Every single fan fic has a hermione vigorously stepping over people's boundaries. This annoys me to no end.. I don't understand if every author is a closeted masochist. They make MCs getting stepped on by people.. a normal person would have been annoyed and found it rude when someone digs their nose so close to them. By reading it I get overwhelmed with annoyance. Damn all the authors. I cant get a single fan fic that has reasonable characters.. either there is a paedophile, a pervert who keeps thinks with his balls, a wimpy one who let's people decide for them having no self respect and dignity letting people invade their personal space repeatedly or just the passive kind who keeps telling that they won't interfere with the plot but ends up changing everything and then finds themselves in knee deep trouble because they were foolish enough to make decisions without thinking.. fuck all.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2020
It's kinda ludicrous that a young adult would get forced by fourteen year olds to give up this much information. This was by far the weakest set up to reveal information that only he knew that I've seen in a while. If it was going to be like this even though I'm strongly on the team that likes full immersion when reading stories like this and severely dislike it when characters go all "your life is a book" and tells everyone. It would've made sense to just have Dumbledore to mind grape the answers out of him from the beginning. At least that way I could preserve the thought that somebody wouldn't be dumb enough to single handedly put himself in a position I which the previous statement would 100% happen.
NathanielTheCat chapter 12 . 6/28/2020
Omake 3 kills me because Dumbledore playing along is something I feel he would 100% do.
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