I would have loved it if william/bud/orginalname if he created his own chant for the ulimited blade works
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"I am the Bane of my Magic
Wand is my Body and spells is my Blood.
I have casted over a Thousand Spells,
Unknown to Reality,
Nor known to Fiction.
Have withstood Reading to create many Spells
Yet those Wands will never hold Work.
So, as I cast-
Unlimited Spell works"

Absolutely Great story

Great story

It's the mandela effect. They're was akways a sixth bed there. You just don't remember it...and a bunch of other people who have never had memory problems and suddenly do just to prove them wrong. :)

Of course it's Gryffindore! All fanfic authors take it as the easy way out.

This will probably get lost, but in the Author's Note at the end of Chapter 25, you say "Also, love quadrangle?" - The correct term for any 4 sided shape is actually a quadrilateral. Sorry to be a nerd, but it kinda niggled at me as an Extension 2 Maths student.

just wasting time trying to get close to the golden trio, for what will there be just to follow the path there is nothing different. yes obviously William is just a fanboy can't think of what's good for him. Good luck

why not make Winky a personal elf, it is clear that elf really help a lot of things and in the diadem room, if not mistaken, a lot of profit is sold. I hope Bud is not stupid to live his next life

weell my first impression is : what an incredibly dum name ... yeah that is pretty much all i have ... insanly bad name ...

this is one of the best fanfic I have ever read.

This story is great! I mean sure, as you say there were issues- but there are issues with any story, and I thoroughly enjoyed this one. I loved William’s character (er...you, I guess?) and I really liked the way you set up the universe and the affection and intimacy between Harry, Hermione, and William. (Not to mention Luna, daphne, Astoria, Neville, Ron, etc). Also seeing your document of your own opinion on how the story ended up was really interesting, thanks for including it. As a... beginner fanfic writer, it was awesome to see someone else’s progress and thoughts on their own work. And sure I could go into detail about what did and didn’t work for me (most things were great, otherwise long story short I pretty much agree with your points about characterisation and pacing etc) but I need to go to bed myself. I just wanted to let you know this story was a lot of fun! I haven’t got this into a good novel length HP fic in ages, I didn’t want to stop reading to have dinner. Great story! I’m excited to see what else you’ve written!

This story is so great it's worthy of my first review. I'll ignore any irregularities I noticed and I'll just say that this is (in an annoying British accent) AWESOME!

Amazing.

The only reason he's having tension issues with the Trio over his "secrets" is because he can't keep his fucking mouth shut. When you don't want someone digging into your so-called secrets then don't go up to them & say, "Do this, I can't tell you why. It's a secret."

I couldnt stop laughing all through the malfoy omake... It was gold lolol