|Reviews for Androphobia|
| nix chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
how old are they? and sheetbrix mehn! That was ... something... It had ME scared! anyway cool! who were the other people? how'd she know one of them was natsume? I thought she couldn't see them? or is it she doesn't know?! oohhhh drama! xDD Just. please continue this! xDD
| Vegie-1526 chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
What a sad story you have there. Why is the genre Tragedy? Is Mikan going to die? Or is it Natsume! Please change the genre if it's not too much tragedy because it's bothering me. :D
Looking froward for the next chapter I hope Natsume will be there :D
Good luck! This story must have a happy ending :D
| TheCrimsonFireFly chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Poor Mikan :'(
I hope on the next chapter Natsume will come out and save Mikan from her nightmare that has been one year after the incident ;) I feel bad for her for being raped. I may be can't survive after that incident and commited suicide. LOL
Well, update soon. I'm looking forward for the next chapter :D
| dancedaze chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
You have an interesting writing style. I really like it!
Definitely adding this to my list of stories to follow. :)
Please update soon!
| natsumefruit chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Sounds good I'd like to read more
| susurinaki chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Eh... Well, it's a good start. It's quite interesting, though your summary is fairly confusing and ambiguous, which I don't like.
Yes, so, as I've said above, it is quite interesting, though I suggest changing the title. It's a fairly good title actually, it gives the reader(s) a clue of what the story is about, but really, you couldn't think of a more original one? I've not seen many books/fics and such titled 'Androphobia', but still, it's simple. Maybe a little too simple. Though, if you want it that way, it's fine. The title's fine. The summary's not, the summary needs help.
Well, the funny thing is, I'm not so expert in writing myself (though I would say I'm fairly good (I don't mean to brag) but my reviews are as constructive as they could get. I guess, I'd be suited to be an editor rather than a writer/author...
Anyway, yes. This needs some help, no serious help, but HELP. Good luck, break a leg and update soon. I'm waiting...