Reviews for Taken
elle chapter 3 . 10/27/2014
you keep switching from third person to first person and it's really annoying not to know who's pov it is. pick one and stick to it.
HD chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
I kno you said it might be a while until you update! But PLEASE try and update soon! IM HOOKED! and the wait kills me :P
Guest chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
Great chapter, post more soon!
SSAmolloy7 chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
Gah! That Kesler is a pain in the ass, so im glad Will kicked the crap out of him! haha Great chapter, you defo kept it angsty and Wills bits with JJ were so sweet! Great chapter, and im looking forward to seeing whats in store for JJ
IniTiniNini chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
Oh, love this chapter. Can't wait to read more. Poor JJ. :)
Lenika08 chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
continua pronto por favor!
CMCrazies chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
HD chapter 3 . 11/27/2012
Great chapter and great writing. Update fast if you can PLEASE!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/27/2012
What a great chapter,post more soon!
kayden444 chapter 3 . 11/27/2012
i really love the story! i love that you had will and henry in it, because lots of people seem to forget that she has a family outside the team. the oly thing i find kind of bothersome, was the fact that you kept on switching point of veiws. it started off as will then you started writing from first person point of veiw, so lots of times it was inconsistant. it wasnt too big a destraction, but its something to think about as you write.
please keep writnig though, i love the story and i cant wait to see what happens next!
CMCrazies chapter 3 . 11/27/2012
Ahhhhhh they found her hope shes okay roll on the next chapter
SSAmolloy7 chapter 3 . 11/27/2012
woah, that was crazy! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time, and since we cant have jj get kidnapped in criminal minds this season anymore, this is defo the next best thing :) Thanks for writing and coming up with this, cuz i really love reading this. I cant wait to read on! its like this with every chapter! :D
IniTiniNini chapter 3 . 11/27/2012
Oh, god. Please update soon, please. Love it, really love it. :)
HD chapter 2 . 11/11/2012
Love this story! I keep checking for updates but theres none :P Cant wait for the next chapter!
JMW chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
Excellent two chapters! Update soon, love JJ!
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